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A MAGICAL KEY

Wouldn't it be lovely to have a magical key, To unlock a world where only kindness exists, A world full of peace, we have yet to see. Bright colours, love and joy, Masses of soft scented flowers, Birds so free and singing sweetly, So calming, I could stay here for hours! The sun is glowing so brightly. Feel the warmth on your skin, Each morning, a good day to begin. A world full of love and laughter, How amazing life would be, Such a wonderful chapter! A place where we all have respect for each other, Enjoy the visit to this earth, Before the fleeting time is over. A wish to unlock a world with this magical key, Where everywhere feels so serene, A world full of love, peace and tranquility! Wishing you a great day! More poems on my Instagram account daisymeadows2023

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Gary Radice

Date: 3/7/2024 3:32:00 AM

Some other world Jeanette. Sadly. It's such a shame worlds like this only exist within the words of poetry, prose and prayer or in the depths of our imaginations. Cheers - Gary

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 3/11/2024 4:02:00 AM

Yes, it would be so nice to have a peaceful world. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/2/2024 10:53:00 AM

Hi Jeanette , thanks for your lovely comment earlier , loved this poem and share your sentiments in their entirety . People like you are the magic that holds the key . Daniel

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 3/6/2024 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts.

Joseph May

Date: 2/28/2024 4:00:00 AM

A magical key for a peaceful world, Lovely write

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 3/6/2024 4:55:00 AM

Thank you. Glad you like it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2024 12:25:00 PM

Hello jeanette Brewin, You know what? that would be very magical if it could happen. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2024 4:12:00 AM

Hello Jeanette, I agree. You are welcome. Thank you. enjoy your day. my friend. /Darlene/

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/25/2024 12:02:00 AM

Yes, it would. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts. Have a good day

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/22/2024 8:59:00 AM

Dear Jeanette, I "wish to unlock a world with this magical key" too. "To unlock a world where only kindness exists," that would be so very lovely indeed! The wishful beauty of your poem resonates deeply with me. Splendid verse! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/25/2024 12:01:00 AM

Thank you Susan, for your kind comments and for reading my posts. Have a good day.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/21/2024 5:22:00 PM

Such a great poem, Jeanette. What a great thought. Have a blessed day, my friend.

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/25/2024 12:00:00 AM

Thank you for your comments. Glad you liked the poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/21/2024 4:07:00 PM

I share your same thoughts and sentiments, Jeanette. I'd like to live in a world where kindness and respect for others was the mantra of co-existence...ah, peace and tranquility...how I yearn for thee. A delightful and upbeat read for me. Have a great evening, Sara

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/24/2024 11:59:00 PM

Thank you Sara for your lovely comments. Have a good weekend.

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2024 11:46:00 AM

It would be lovely, indeed...

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/25/2024 12:03:00 AM

Thank you for reading my posts and for your comments. Have a good day.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/21/2024 4:56:00 AM

Dear Jeanette, Your poem is such a beautiful wish for a world filled with kindness, peace, and love. Your words show an idyllic place where joy and tranquility reign. Thank you for sharing this uplifting vision, and may your day be as bright and beautiful as the world you've imagined. - Blessings, Daniel

Jeanette Brewin
Date: 2/24/2024 11:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts. Glad you liked the poem.