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A Magic Adventure of Peter the Pan

A Magic Adventure of Peter The Pan/AKA Peta The Fwying Pan Peter was a fine young pan with blue eyes Like all the other pans his age, except, Peter could not yet pronounce 'R's'--he tried... And 'L's'...so hard he tried. He even wept. School had been especially hard today Peter had been poked, teased, and made fun of More this day than any other school day... And the ride home took so long on the bus. When he came through the door, his mama knew "Why the long face? Are you hurt? Are you sick?" "No ma'am," said Peter, "Just tiwad fwom schoow". "Some cookies and milk may just be the trick!" Mama said, as Peter sat down to eat. By now, everyone was gathered around To hear of his day--and sneak a treat. So he told them his story...and they frowned. "How can someone be so cruel! Makes no sense! You are the smartest and brightest of pans!" Said Debbie Dishwasher-- then cycle rinsed. The rest agreed and came up with a plan. "Okay! It's agreed!" said Bob the blender. "You need magic!--THAT--we can render! Charles Chalice and Gail Goblet--my dear Bring what you have, for this magic milk shake. Michael Magic Grill...you go get us some beer And also get Peter a great big steak!" Then everyone sang together with cheer: "A parr-ty! A parr-ty! It's a parr-ty! We are all...having...a magic--parr-ty!" Everyone was busy, hust'ling around. Tams the Golden Toaster was making toast. Tex Texas Tea Pot hummed a whist'ling sound. David Dish and Sara Spoon danced the most, Except for Marlon Mop--he could 'get down'! Carol Crock Pot was fixing up the Soup. Russell Rolling Pin had rolled out a crust For a magic pie with love from the coop. Joann Juicer made fresh smoothies--a must! Suddenly...a sound was heard on the stoop... "Who could that be? It's nearly midnight!" Said Cyndi Chandlier all bright with light. Christopher Cutting-board called, "I'll go see!" Vienna Vaccume said, "Not without me!" "Wait!" Debbie Dishwasher cried from the sink. "Let's look at more options. We need to think. It could be someone in need of a meal... Or, it's a burglar--come here to steal!" "Everyone else! Quickly! Hide inside me Until we find out who that sound might be!" deborah burch© 5/23/2012 *****end part I...conclusion in part II

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Date: 5/29/2012 1:37:00 AM
such creativeness, do i also see a few soupoers in here?, this is wonderful Deborah going to part II.
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:49:00 PM
This is a very good story/poem. I like it. I'm going to part 2. Lucilla
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Date: 5/24/2012 10:52:00 AM
OMG fantastic!!! A diffinet #1 write and what a great childrens book! on to part 2! Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2012 1:56:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha ha, you are a nut,,,,,I thought my sense of humour was off the wall..love it,...David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/24/2012 3:19:00 AM
:) lol!!! I am so gwad you wiked it, David Dish--AKA: David the Dancing Dish in following episodes...lol ;) more adventures are planned for Peter and his friends...hope to start sketch work this weekend-- should be interesting ...love ya, cap'n deb
Date: 5/23/2012 4:07:00 PM
greaaat storyteller you are.. so amusing and fun, deborah... waiting for the continuation of this party!..:) hugggs!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/23/2012 11:11:00 PM
thank you nette, have heart, you're slated in Peter's next adventure with a few more ;) hugs, love ya much, deb

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