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A Magic Adventure of Peter the Pan--Part Ii

Inside the Dishwasher everyone rushed! Clinks, clanks, rattles, 'Ouches' and ' Ohs'! "Would you pa--lease, settle down!" said Deb--They hushed. "Now we can hear...let's just see how this goes." Curious, Peter, looked out through a chinc, And watched Vie and Chris-- approaching by twos. They opened the door--and who do you think-- Standing there wearing her fine Jimmy Choos, Ms Lost Sonnet!--spoke not a word--but winked. Wilma Wine-Corkscrew, dressed in purple hues Gave the 'all clear', and Peter spread the news. "We're having a party Ms Sonnet, please, Won't you join us? It's a magic party For Peter", said Ruben Rotisserie. Bob Blender poured her a drink--quite hardy. Connie Candellabra was flaming bright As Ms Sonnet swept past to the soft couch. Carolyn Cookie Jar screamed with such fright, "Quick! She's on fire!" Then Lost cried, "Ouch!" "I'll save her", said Catie Collander. "Here!" But the water leaked through her like a sieve. Susan Spatula yelled, "Have no fear, dear!" Yet, the fire held on and would not give-- Others tried, but could not stop the fire. Then Peter said, "I wuw twy! I can do it! With 'Awwy, I can fwy! Way up highya! Togethwa, we can save Ms Wost Sonnet! Awwy is my fwend. He tawks funny, too! He's aw the way fwom Engwand and he is My Supwa Cape! So I can fwy! It's twue! No H's wive theaw--his name is wike this: 'Awwy--not Hawwy." So now, they all knew. "Did I 'ear some bloke colling my name?" "Yes! 'Awwy, me! We've Ms Sonnet to save!" Harry Handtowel--AKA, Super Cape--fame Was now on the neck of Peter the Brave! With no hesitation quickly they flew, Smothered the fire and saved just one shoe. Brittle and weak, Lost needed more than glue... "She needs magic! Oh! Paweeze! What can we do?" "Peter...we only made enough for you". Said Carol Crock-pot. They all cried, "Boo Hoo..." "Then give huw my magic! That's what you do!" So quickly they sprinkled the magic brew. Ms Sonnet was greatful--then said, "Adieu". "Peter, you've done well," said Anne Assam Tea, "Let's all have a cup'a tea and you'll see... "'Magic's believing in yourself, --frankly, Do that--and you can do--anything!" ~©deborah burch 5/23/2012 *Special appearance by "Lost Sonnet", courtesey of David Williams...with much gratitude, thank you all for appearing ;)...Peter has many adventures to come...big hugs, love you all, cap'n deb

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Date: 5/29/2012 1:44:00 AM
I'll never see my kitchen the same way again, now i know all my pots and pans talk about me, when my back is turned, i could see this on a.m t.v, this is so good. in facy it is brilliant. harry
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/26/2016 11:18:00 PM
Lol. 'Awwy!!! How are you!! Miss you bunches. I've just returned. And back at it. Big Hugggs!! Cap'n deb.
Date: 5/25/2012 2:49:00 PM
Overwhelming this collection of philosophical pots, pans and other utensils. You've outdone Dickens, himself, in bringing the inanimate to life. VERY impressive! Love, daver
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 6:01:00 AM
OH MY!! Daver! I am speechless! thank you for the mor than kind honour...I will cherrish the thought ;) oh to even come close to Dickens would be... magic ;)...big hug, love ya, deb
Date: 5/25/2012 10:45:00 AM
WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE DARLING!!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 5:57:00 AM
lol...thank you dear Elliot! :)) your character didnt play a part in this episode, but he exists!! ;) love ya, deb
Date: 5/24/2012 4:07:00 PM
This is great work and thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/26/2012 5:51:00 AM
thanks so very much Lucilla:)
Date: 5/24/2012 10:57:00 AM
see Debbie bouncing in her chair! we could combime my chairs doing musical chairs with yours pots & pans..we should look for others to join up! I could illustrate!! [course those dern publishers what to complie & pick themselves grrrrrr] a+ 7 and which one do you want me to fav? Light & Love
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/24/2012 11:34:00 AM
lol, Debbie Dishwasheaw, you may fav eithewa! Wooben fav'd both!! lol wuve you, Peta the bwave! ;)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/24/2012 11:27:00 AM
LoL!!! Highness!!!*curtsey* I was beginning to think only the guys liked it :0 ;) I amm so glad you like it...does this mean I missed out on a #1 in the contest, ;) ha ha! that may be one for Joe's "I just cant win!!" LOL! I'm going to start on the sketches this weekend If we lived closer we could tweek sketch ideas! ! Another adventure is in the works...email me thoughts ..sounds like an adventure! !!;) love ya bunches! deb
Date: 5/24/2012 10:52:00 AM
awesome ,
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/24/2012 11:10:00 AM
thank you nathan:) don't lose heart, Peter is having another adventure with more characters...sure to bear your name ;) huggs, love ya deb
Date: 5/24/2012 2:02:00 AM
me wike vewy much..ha ha ha ha ha..super congrats on this very slendid piece of work.. roll on the episode..David xxx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/24/2012 3:25:00 AM
:D thank you sooo vewwy much!! I am touched and deepwy honouwed!!! ;) love ya, cap'n deb Oh, I think Ms Sonnet may be heading to Fwance!!! ;)
Date: 5/23/2012 9:58:00 PM
Deb, thank you so much,, and about your soup mail... oooo..I'm all ears... anyways~ the first part made this whole story so far..awesome...... thank you for sharing... good night..pd
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/23/2012 10:44:00 PM
big hugs 'Tex'--PD ;) lol love you bunches ..thanks for everything! deb

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