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A Lullabye For Ava

Close your eyes my darlin' girl, day is done, time for dreams to unfurl. Dream of pretty ponies p r a n c i n g by, of fairies and princesses as well, maybe even visit Tinkerbelle. Dream of having wings to f l y then soar through rainbow tinted sky, up where angels dwell. higher higher, rising Angels will keep watch as you dream your sweetest dreams cocooned in loves warm mantle. Sleep, my darlin', sleep until morning rises fair. Follow your dreams where they lead. 9/28/16 For Laura Loo's Three Style II contest Tied for 2nd Place

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Date: 10/23/2016 2:50:00 AM
Dear Kim, congratulations on your great win! ! sweet poem!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:16:00 PM
Very good, Kim, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:01:00 AM
how sweet Kim! It definitely reminds me on my little angel, who isn't so little anymore. Very lovely for a lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:25:00 AM
This is an excellent lullaby, Kim:) very well written:) sure to win:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/1/2016 11:33:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 9/28/2016 2:48:00 PM
Such a sweet lullaby, and it flows beautifully. Good luck for the contest, Kim. Agnes
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/1/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 9/28/2016 2:13:00 PM
I love this - the set up, flow, content. Would like to hear it sung, can you do that? (I can't, I'm told!) Very lovely, Kim ... CayCay
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/1/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay! My singing leaves a lot to be desired, so I don't think I'll do that.
Date: 9/28/2016 12:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful lullaby Kim...you must read it to her...a favorite
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/1/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Tim! She's 3 yrs old and will be arriving for a visit in a couple days, so I will get to read it to her.

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