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A Love's Death

With a slow and subtle prick, Oh, how the blade doth tarry. It cuts the heart to the quick. Blind optimism cannot parry. Wild shadows spring and dance; Hope fades grimly nonetheless. Without pomp and circumstance, Its life slides into nothingness. With gasps and groans it shudders. Turning one last time to see. Through waning tears it mutters, “Have no pity you for me. For after every dusk comes night; Blackness into void seems drawn. But, ever will the Force of Light, Bring round a pure new dawn.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/22/2016 11:57:00 AM
Nice to read this epic poem again, Chris... linda
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Date: 4/17/2016 6:45:00 PM
Excellent cadence and rhyme... first rate phrasing and imagery too. Well done Chris! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful write. Keep it up,,,,,,,,,,hugs
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Chris Coleman
Date: 4/6/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thank you! Fortunately, I wrote this several years ago and have experienced great healing and blessing since then.
Date: 4/5/2016 8:04:00 PM
Hi Chris, amazing and epic write... i enjoyed the dusk imagery... LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! That particular verse was really powerful and inspirational for me. I am glad you appreciated it.

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