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A Lovers Voyage

Sail away with me on a lovers voyage. Let the wind's soft caress carry us gently out to sea. Free of inhibition; cloaked in midnight satin; each breathtaking star holds us captive. Moonlight's spell drawing us deeper still; feeling the rise and fall of ocean swells. Covered in misty wet kisses, breaching vessels bow; a hypnotic rhythm, taps softly on the keel. Wind gusts hints of welcomed storms. Tossed by gale through uncharted waters as we crest the surging waves, one after another. Adrift, as day breaks in sun's warm glow Anchored only to each other.... A lovers voyage.

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/10/2014 7:47:00 PM

this is truly very beautifully penned

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/9/2014 6:57:00 AM

This is soft, sensual and romantic. The images drift slowly through the mind.

Robert Nehls

Date: 8/6/2014 6:55:00 PM

This makes me think of soul mates on a voyage that never ends. Anchored only to each other. so well crafted, my friend. Loved it.... Robert.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/27/2014 9:18:00 PM

A newbie to writing Arlene??? Hard to believe but I'll take your word for it...Lordy me, what will you become in a few years?

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 9:26:00 PM

My first poem on here was my first poem, dear Tim.. Never even read any except nursery rhymes... But I love it.. The first one was a tribute to my uncle I put on fb just out of the blue.. Got lots of positive feedback, so I thought I would give it a try.. I am hooked.. Hope to improve.. Thank you again, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/27/2014 5:32:00 PM

Fav poet too...

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 8:04:00 PM

As A newbie to writing, I am extremely honored.. Hugs.. Arlene

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/27/2014 5:29:00 PM

Go directly to my favs, do not pass go...

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 8:03:00 PM

Very honored by your comment, dear Tim.. Happy you enjoyed it.. Hugs.. Arlene

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2014 9:56:00 PM

Ten years c ago I went on such a voyage and am still happily living it now.. A soft romantic write that stirs the heart and warms the soul. BBravo!!!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/26/2014 10:16:00 PM

Aww! how sweet, dear Robert.. So happy for you my friend.. Thank you for the nice comments.. Hugs.. Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:05:00 PM

this is lovely, Arlene. Love that last line: anchored only to each other. So nice!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/26/2014 3:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea... Trying to work on my vocabulary and imagery a little.. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/26/2014 4:43:00 AM

Oh that's lovely Arlene my dear friend! Emotive n powerful !

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/26/2014 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Upma.. Hugs my dear friend.. Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 3:01:00 PM

- So romantic Arlene ...... love the way you perform it - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/25/2014 3:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, sweet Anne Lise.. Hugs.. Arlene

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/25/2014 1:53:00 PM

love the metaphor..an enjoyable read my poetic friend...there's a gentleness to your poetry

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/25/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Frederic my dear friend, for the visit and sweet, encouraging comments... Hugs... Arlene

Tim Smith

Date: 7/25/2014 1:43:00 PM

Where do I sign up?.... Quite the romantic voyage..the icing on the cake is the storm...oh how I love a good storm....hugs Tim

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/25/2014 2:11:00 PM

Me too! Tim.. Love to hear thunder and rain on a tin roof.. Thanks for the visit and nice comments, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene