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A Lovely Rose Flower

Hey Lovely Rose Flower! I like you very much Your lovely Soft Leaves How Nice it is to Touch Hey Lovely Rose Flower! I like your Petals very much How Beautiful you’re Design Like a Fruit Bunch When Honey-Bee comes to take Honey, They get cheery to found like some Money Hey Lovely Rose Flower! I like you very much

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Date: 10/20/2010 12:15:00 PM
Hello umair. Nice poetry brother. Nice to see my fellow countryman on soup among my friends n family from across the globe. Thanks for your comment on my poem estranged love. Best wishes, Taha
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:13:00 AM
Hello Umari, just stopping by to say congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:12:00 AM
HI UMAIR, GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~
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Date: 8/25/2010 11:13:00 AM
congrats on your feature!
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Umair. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:06:00 AM
I noticed my rose plant I thought was dead this morning had one lone red rose bloom and kind of sad. congrats on the featured poem this week!!
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Date: 8/19/2010 4:13:00 PM
All like the rose. I am also one among them. I also like your rosy poem, a lovely poem
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Date: 8/18/2010 7:34:00 PM
I would like to thank Jamecia, Linda, Dr. Ram Mehta and Carol for loving and admiring my first poem at PoetrySoup, it's all my pleasure to be with you guys :)
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:28:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Umair. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:09:00 AM
A nice write on rose lovely rose, Umair
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Date: 8/17/2010 9:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/17/2010 8:25:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem.......very good :)
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