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I'm drifting along in a boat In the shade of bald cypress trees They're covered in gray Spanish moss Hanging down to their cypress knees With the swipe of a catfish tail As he lunges to grab a snack His splash breaks the afternoon silence Minnows flee from the hungry attack Turtles are sunning on an old fallen tree Bullfrogs croaking for rain The echoing cries of a lonely loon As he pauses between refrains At times escaping into nature When life gets too extreme I go back to the days of a country boy To a boat, on a creek, in a dream January 14 2017 by Daniel Turner

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Date: 1/27/2017 1:24:00 PM
As I read your poem I can see all these actions happening. This is a beautiful day dream. I see myself in it.It is peaceful.Being by the water is peaceful. I miss the water. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:31:00 AM
I love this, Daniel. So peaceful....and I see you must have won a contest. And, I can see why. So, congrats to you too. Carole
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Date: 1/22/2017 11:24:00 AM
Congrats on such a beautiful day dream you carried us along here. Well penned Daniel. Keep it up. :)
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:25:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ... a beautiful poem ...
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Date: 1/21/2017 8:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Daniel
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:31:00 AM
Quite a serene daydream. Congrats on your win, Daniel.
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:28:00 AM
at present this is still a daydream....until the temps warm and the ice melts and then......me, the turtles, frogs, muskrats, bass and my kayak.....alone....to dream. This is a picturesque taunt Daniel.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:30:00 AM
I could read poetry like this for hours on end...I hope this beauty will appear in a book. I am faving it. My emotions were stirred Daniel. I hope you return soon. You soar like an eagle, glide like a swan, run like a cheetah, you are a shape shifter! Hugs, Connie ; ) 7+
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:00:00 AM
Hello Daniel ! What a lovely write ! I enjoyed reading this wonderful quatrian ..I hope to come back and read more of your poems. 7/7 for this and hugs ~ Red `
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:06:00 PM
Now that was a lovely little daydream, Daniel. I'm down for that boat ride on the quiet tide. Cool and relaxing poem, my friend. Outstanding imagery, well expressed. Love and joy to you always.
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Date: 1/18/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for a lovely tour this morning Daniel. As long as you promise the gators would behave I'd love to ride along! Cheers ~ john
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:57:00 AM
A beautiful dream, Daniel:) you took me there with your captivating words:) a 7:)
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Date: 1/17/2017 11:20:00 PM
A lovely daydream with good chosen wordso x
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/17/2017 11:21:00 PM
Words xxxxx
Date: 1/17/2017 1:12:00 PM
a pipe dream wrapped in beautiful artwords, daniel..hugggs
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Date: 1/16/2017 6:50:00 PM
Such a beautiful, nostalgic daydream, Daniel, imaged so well in this tranquil poem. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Sandra
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Date: 1/16/2017 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful Daniel. Reminds me of my days as a young girl growing up in Florida. I'm a nature lover too and those were my happiest times. Great job. A big seven from me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/16/2017 9:56:00 AM
This is so comforting and beautifully written Daniel. This is definitely a wonderful daydream. Thank you for inviting us along.
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Date: 1/15/2017 12:23:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one..I wish that I could not have thought about mosquitoes and red bugs though in that setting I think they would be there..Maybe I need to take DEET in my daydream with me..LOL..It has good flow and rhyme..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 12:32:00 PM
Very few mosquitoes in the heat of the day, even in the shade:) Thanks for the giggle, Mrs Sara. I'd bet you have been on a few creek banks. Maybe even been fishing a time or two:)
Date: 1/15/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thank god your a country boy...reminds me of Tom Sawyer...very well displayed Daniel...god bless...^WW^
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 10:46:00 AM
You know John, my childhood was a lot like Tom Sawyer in many ways. Great book and I love Mark Twain:) Thanks for friendly visits.
Date: 1/15/2017 9:01:00 AM
What a lovely little bit of peace you've found DT, congratulations my friend...
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/15/2017 7:51:00 PM
I'll bring the single malt and the cigars and we can tell lies and lislten to Lyle lovitt till sunrise or we run out of whiskey or lies,,,
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Charlie. You're welcome to join me anytime, my friend. Might even drown a few crickets:)
Date: 1/15/2017 6:50:00 AM
- It's so wonderful with dreams ... lovely poem, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 8:22:00 AM
Yes it is:) Thank you Anne Lise.
Date: 1/15/2017 3:45:00 AM
Great one for the contest.... A sweet day dream... Reads like a winner...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja:)
Date: 1/14/2017 9:56:00 PM
Hi Daniel, You have painted a lovely scene. I enjoyed the dream and the imagery is amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Alexis:)
Date: 1/14/2017 9:39:00 PM
the imagery is wonderful it's like I'm watching the movements of the day... Our childhood dreams do give us a sense of peace. Hugs Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Mrs Eve.. Wonderful to see you:)
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