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A Love That Could Not Last

I loved you with all my heart and prayed to God that we would never be apart. But, I guess my prayer didn’t go through because now I’m left without you. With a single tear rolling out of my eye, I will never stop loving you. You were everything in the world to me and you will always be. I will never forget that you showed me how to love. When I thought all hope was lost you were there to listen to what I had to say. Now there’s nothing I can say or do to get you back to me because it’s all up to you. I just hope you make the right decision and come back to me. All I need now is a miracle so I can find a way back to your heart and make you mine once again and show you how much you meant to me. So I can fill this emptiness inside my heart that you took with you when you left. I knew everything about you and told you all my secrets and had so much trust in you that you would never do this to me but the nightmare has come true. And all I can do now is go back to my praying and hope this one will get through. Because there is never a day that passes by that I don’t think of you and all you’ve showed me, but now all I have left of you are the memories we’ve shared. You were always there for me with open arms, a smile on your face and those brown eyes of yours that I loved so much. That is all a memory now because you left me all alone in this crazy world of ours. Just always remember that I will still love you no matter what happens and it doesn’t matter how much you change because I will always love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 8:58:00 AM
Stacie, I have always believed that once you love in your heart that love always remains - I hope that your prayers are answered - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, mj
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Date: 5/19/2010 8:11:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:32:00 PM
A wonderful write - many congrats on being featured this week, rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Stacie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 1:04:00 PM
SWEET WRITE, BEAUTIFUL WRITE, AND TO THAT I WOULD LIKE TO ADD AS WELL, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:14:00 PM
You've poured your heart out, nothing else you can do but pray. Well told sad love story, Stace. You're an awesome story teller. Keep the creative pen flowing.
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