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A Love So Rare

You never exspect the unexspected I thought this might go some where I hate that feeling of being rejected Thinking she liked me by her stare Now feels like l'm again subjected To whats become the here nor there A past time that is though still collected When l think of every moment we'd share It seems a long time since we'd seperated Though no body else could ever compare Something l could never have anticipated This love that just seemed to be so rare An exstesion follow up to poem what love brings open ended ect about past relationship that was brief taken from original poem brief encoute r 2003 extra verse never felt like this so elavated That feeling of walking on air At one time perhaps seemed perpetuated But thought that we were the perfect pair

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Date: 5/5/2021 11:36:00 PM
Nice one, David, some relationships are just not meant to be, however precious they seem to us:)
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David Scott
Date: 5/9/2021 9:31:00 PM
Thank you two lines wete taken from brief encounter poem just word play l did feel perhaps a little repetitive l have a few in this pattern as had one pubilshed on this style

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