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A Love Lost and Found

An angel, he appeared one afternoon - amazing, amorous, and alluring. Beguiling her with beautiful ballads, how splendidly he bewitched her! Long languorous summer days they lazed in a field of daffodils as she lay blissfully in his brawny bronzed arms looking lovingly into his eyes - those baby blues with long lush lashes. Seventeen were they. Their first love it was - a lovely flirtatious and fabulous first love. Suddenly, it all just stopped. Sent away to serve in war, her sweetheart sadly disappeared with barely a Sayonara. Several seasons swept away like brown leaves in September’s breezes. Studying at school, sometimes she recalled with longing - the love of her young life and the boyish glee in his bright blue long-lashed eyes. Unbeknownst to her, her lost boyfriend was back from his lonesome barracks and the bloody battlefields of an awful World War. Back was he, though limping from a bullet to his leg and looking for the love of HIS young life. Seventy-seven years later, see them sauntering together in a field of daffodils situated by a house he built for her - two lone centenarians with grown twin sons and seven grand-kids. Their lasting love was lost but only for a blink of their long lifetime - a lifetime of lovely marital bliss that envelopes them still with bountiful blessings. March 31, 2022 for My Lost And Found Love Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Date: 2/12/2024 6:47:00 PM
love the story
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/12/2024 11:16:00 PM
Wow I almost forgot ever writing this. Glad you like it
Date: 4/24/2022 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Andrea. I enjoyed the love story. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/23/2022 7:10:00 AM
An amazing story of lost love and found my dear friend Andrea. A love that lives happily ever after. CONGRATULATIONS on your well deserved top win! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your great win . The second time I read it, I liked it all the more. This goes into my FAV.
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:05:00 PM
"Seventy-seven years later, see them sauntering together in a field of daffodils" - Great story. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wonderful love story. God bless you.
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Date: 4/22/2022 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, On your outright first place medal win. Your contest entry is truly amazing. Howard
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Date: 4/3/2022 12:01:00 AM
This is fantastic"Seventy-seven years later, see them sauntering together in a field of daffodils situated by a house he built for her - two lone centenarians with grown twin sons and seven grand-kids."
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Date: 4/1/2022 5:22:00 AM
Enjoyed the happy ending of your story, Andrea. The power of Love!
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Date: 4/1/2022 1:06:00 AM
A tale of love eventually found. So full of imagery and emotion. Good to have bountiful love. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 3/31/2022 10:16:00 PM
Oh the emotion, a story of so many times, yet with your special recipe of ample intensity, and the feeling of being there.
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Date: 3/31/2022 9:54:00 PM
So enamored by this wonderful love lost for an iota of time but restored for long years ! Great write Andrea ! Win big!
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Date: 3/31/2022 9:19:00 PM
Andrea, I love your alliteration. The language is great, and such passion.
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Date: 3/31/2022 2:19:00 PM
Andrea, you've written a heartbreaking and brilliantly expressed tale! wish you the best of luck in the contest
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Date: 3/31/2022 1:11:00 PM
a very touching and beautifully told story, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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