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A Love Forlorn

My love’s as hated as an April snow, When newborn buds are touched by Winter’s kiss, A barren stroke which grays all greens that grow, An unrequited love which springs amiss. Unseasoned fancies must I put to sleep, And outward show that which I should not seem, With silent sighs my split heart’s contents keep, To unlock life and joy in wondrous dream: Our love may burnish out the fiery sphere, Projecting softened light on Dian’s globe, The tuned sounds may sweet the atmosphere, The more fool I to dwell in dreaming’s probe. My spirits oft make oceans out of drams: To bark and trade my heartstrings but for grams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/23/2016 2:30:00 PM
Jeremy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2016 11:38:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup Jeremy. :)
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Date: 5/23/2016 10:52:00 AM
Jeremy,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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