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A Love For All Seasons

At the spring celebration Jill had a head start She danced across the floor straight to his open heart Lit by love and glowing like an eternal flame Passion in motion ere she even knew his name When he first took her hand, she felt electrified In the months that ensued feelings intensified Carpet of crimson rose petals strewn on her bed The pair gave not a thought to what might lie ahead But when the festive holiday season came ‘round A garland of fir branches on her head he crowned As he knelt before her in front of the fireplace In a blanket of tender love she felt encased Bowing before her, he presented a diamond ring For their love affair proved to be more than a spring fling *Entry for Brian's 100th Anniversary poem challenge on Aspects of Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/10/2012 8:29:00 AM
Hey you!!!Come back!!Post a poem!!!!!
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Date: 7/25/2011 7:13:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Carolyn. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:16:00 PM
How lovely. Congratulations Carolyn. It is nice to see that you are entering and winning. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:07:00 AM
This is really beautiful Carolyn.. Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest ;) lief vir jou, Wilma
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Nice going. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/22/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sonnet" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:55:00 PM
So sweet and romantic..a lovely piece my dear . congrats. BG
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:58:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on your 9th place win in the contest with this 'breath of fresh air', just lovely
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:34:00 PM
Carolyn, lovely Sonnet especially love the ending.. wishing you the best for Francine's contest.. All the best for tomorrow as well.. Love you Wilma
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:02:00 PM
Yes. A June wedding in the making. Aint love grand. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:26:00 AM
Beautiful "Fairy tale Come True" sonnet for the contest. (Is this how he proposed to you?) Love and sonnets...go together with sweetness upon it! (Getting corny, here.) Enjoyed this poem. Smiles.
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:19:00 AM
So romantic and nicely penned, Carolyn! Enjoyed the read this late Pentecost Monday afternoon. Wish you best of luck in the contest!....Love, Geret
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:48:00 PM
yes a very creative and very romantic piece of poetry. good luck in contest.
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:09:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write, Carolyn. LOL, yes, I imagined grey curls and floral dresses - maybe knitting : )
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:10:00 PM
Enamored with your words in this.Beautiful.You will have no problems in this contest....Best wishes Carolyn....as always me
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:18:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this romantic work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:16:00 PM
hey you, your poem is very good as always, I'm more concerned about your health is it getting better? God as we know has a very good way of showing us what can happen in faith, anyway, I've moved from santa Barbara and moved to Buelllton california into a new place so that is why I haven't posted any poems lately, but it wil be ok after wednesday this week and should be more into you when I go back online by saturday, God bless lol robert
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:31:00 AM
Soaked with romantism...beautiful Sonnet..visit me Carolyn.
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:29:00 AM
"Some enchanted evening, da, da, da, da, da -daaaaaaa." This sounds like a school girl fantasy. I have them too. Aint they fun! Love, daver...P.S. Mine are school BOY fantasies. "Across a crowded room - da, dadada daaaa."
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:27:00 AM
a most romantic, sensitive sonnet, carols.. i go dreamy here with the tickles of love... best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:17:00 AM
An enjoyable, uplifting, and positive message encased in a pleasing form...liked it!
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:14:00 AM
What a very sweet story of love, enjoyed reading your sonnet, Carolyn :D isn't that just awesome when this happens? Thank you very much for always leaving such insightful comments on my poems, happy to share a something new with the bloodstones and you are just too kind to say that, but I have to disagree, you actually had me sort of cackling at myself- yes I am oval, oval ovals everywhere, I can be a Michelin girl lol :D but I deeply appreciate your confidence in my figure hugs :D thank you
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:01:00 AM
Sweet romantic write that will sure to be a chart topper!!! Hope you are resting ad feeling al little better... love frm me to you always Michael
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