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A Love Far Away

I wanna reside in u the way u want to reside in me I wanna be by ur side like u want me to be I wanna share that love beyond wat words could define I wanna live in ua eyes and let ur glow settle in mine I wanna be that smile with which u open ur eyes I can be that morning when everything is fine I can be the star that you can gaze in the night I wanna be the charm of ur innocent eyes I can be the love for u, each and every time U are the ocean but i maybe a wave U are the sky but i maybe jus one of the million stars U are beautiful but i maybe jus an admirer U are a life breathing life in another but i can be the one who would give it away for you U deserve to get love and i can give it all to you U are a dream that i can only dream U are as beautiful as the life A blooming flower, a waking dawn, a sky of colours, the breeze of warmth But maybe i m jus one of ur million admirers.

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:02:00 PM

EREM, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Erem Shaikh
Date: 10/20/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you so much. It's truly encouraging. I read your poems, they are amazing. I hope I would be able to express my thoughts too. I used to write and after a long time, I feel i should continue doing so. I joined Poetrysoup, and I m so glad I did, because I think it can help me improve. If u read any of my poems, feel free to guide me, I would appreciate it. Happy to be friends.. Erem:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/11/2016 11:06:00 AM

Erem, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Erem Shaikh
Date: 10/12/2016 1:49:00 AM

Thank you so much. I m glad I joined this community. Will surely read your poems. You can surely guide me, where I need to improve, i would appreciate it. Thank you so much once again:)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/9/2016 12:04:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath//

Erem Shaikh
Date: 10/9/2016 11:02:00 PM

Thank u so much. Glad i joined. Hope u liked my poem.