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A Love Declared

“I love you since without love I'm nothing.” Quote _ by Poet , Slowly, we stroll languidly along the rill’s banks, Toward the oldest mighty oak, we slowly walk, How gladly I relive all my love dreams with thanks. We sit on a bench, my heart I slowly unlock. A soft light breeze gently ruffles her sable hair, I look into her dark eyes shining in wonder. Symbolic glory of her luscious mighty flair. Sincere love so deep can never be a blunder. Come dearest into the comfort of my warm arms, You know me well by now my sweet, my only love, Come to me, you need not feel excessive alarms. Loyalty I swear before the Good God above. Caress each other by enchanting tranquil air I have great trust that our great love always so sweet. I kneel, hold your hands and have but one long prayer. Our marriage will soon bloom, be thoroughly complete. Slowly, we stroll languidly along the rill's banks, A soft light breeze gently ruffles her sable hair, Come dearest into the comfort of my warm arms, Caress each other by enchanting tranquil air. 30 November 2020 Placed 1 My Created Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/15/2020 4:02:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2020 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "wonderful" quote and write. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................
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Date: 12/13/2020 6:59:00 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/12/2020 12:38:00 PM
Victor, my first read of your poetry is a lavish one. Beautiful expression of feelings that go beyond words. Deep love, reminded me of my Devotion poems written for my husband.
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Date: 12/12/2020 8:44:00 AM
Hello Victor, Victor, this such a romantic poem. I read this poem several times. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2020 2:19:00 PM
Hello Victor, I hope you do to. Enjoy your evening m
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/12/2020 10:11:00 AM
Thank you. I hope I'll get a placement.
Date: 12/4/2020 10:25:00 AM
My friend this write is reserved for a win! It is almost as if you have recalled a love from the past and offer her a world of love. Well penned Victor, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/3/2020 7:43:00 PM
I like the rhyme very much and the depth of the love in this poem.
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Date: 12/1/2020 4:42:00 PM
very pretty and romantic. I think the key is to first come up with the lines at the bottom and organize the poem from there . Great job!
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Date: 12/1/2020 3:10:00 AM
We unlock the heart and open wide the mind to a so beautiful poetry dripping with sweet nourishing love in an enchanting Nature setting! Every single pulsating heart would dream of such a love declaration! You made a wish, a dream so true in your amazing poetry, Victor! An immense delight reading a poetry deserving the honour of an outshining win! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 11/30/2020 11:59:00 PM
This charming poem glows w/love supreme, Victor. Ever the elegant quill Romantic are you, Sir Lovealot. Real Goodie passion poetry! Love and peace forever.
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Date: 11/30/2020 10:32:00 PM
A very lovely Poem. Thank you, Victor. Good Luck in the contest
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Date: 11/30/2020 8:52:00 PM
Your verse is so wonderfully rich in imagery and romance. Such pleasurable reading! :)
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Date: 11/30/2020 11:07:00 AM
A beautiful love poem, Victor. I enjoyed reading it :)
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Date: 11/30/2020 9:44:00 AM
I love it, so very romantic with great imagery and flow. Hugs
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Date: 11/30/2020 7:06:00 AM
WoW!Victor, This is so romantic. I enjoyed reading your poems of love and etc. Thanks for taking me on such a lovely “ walk.” Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2020 5:42:00 AM
Richly romantic poem, Victor--love flows beautifully in every verse. As always, your creativity shines in this tender write.
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Date: 11/30/2020 5:28:00 AM
A beautiful love story...one worth reminiscing! God bless!
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Date: 11/30/2020 5:28:00 AM
You do like to go on a romantic walk, be it a romantic walk in word.. A lovely poem Victor..
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Date: 11/30/2020 3:59:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic and descriptive work. Good imagery. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2020 2:50:00 AM
- A lovely poem for the contest Victor, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2020 1:26:00 AM
Nothing beats a romantic walk, another well written verse from your romantic pen Victor. Hope your week goes well. Tom
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