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A Love Complete

He helps her across the street That their love for each other is complete Their hair is gray But their love was never taken away To me thats true love That they fit like a glove I want someone to be with until I am old and gray And that he helps me anyway They seemed to be together forever No matter the day or weather They are always together forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 8:57:00 PM
I've had similar thoughts,when I see elderly married couples that have been together for so long. I really like what you say in lines 3,4, 5, 6. Thanks for sharing that. Also thank you for your comment on my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:09:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, that is love
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