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A Love Can Change the Lover (A Mini Story)

I was a tipical girl Dreaming each night of my many dreams I had a unique personality Middle school is where i found my twin Three years of friendship I didn't want it to change One morning A very strange day I met my opposite way He was somone I thought I wouldn't enjoy A non-well manard boy His voice milipuated my ears His view blinded the real I hot trapped under someone else She enjoyed his company She felt she had everything, like rich with luxery She claimed she was me People noticed it wasn't She claimed harder and harder an won peoples eyes One by one my true treasures started to leave She made me look like somone I couldn't be I was filled with tears, why did he come to me? I pushed and pushed and finally broke her out I looked back and forth Look what I let take over I gotta go get my life back in order

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Date: 3/29/2010 10:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Christy. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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