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A love can change the lover (a mini story)

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A love can change the lover (a mini story)

I was a tipical girl
Dreaming each night of my many dreams
I had a unique personality
Middle school is where i found my twin
Three years of friendship I didn't want it to change

One morning
A very strange day
I met my opposite way
He was somone I thought I wouldn't enjoy
A non-well manard boy
His voice milipuated my ears
His view blinded the real

I hot trapped under someone else
She enjoyed his company
She felt she had everything, like rich with luxery
She claimed she was me
People noticed it wasn't
She claimed harder and harder an won peoples eyes

One by one my true treasures started to leave
She made  me look like somone I couldn't be
I was filled with tears, why did he come to me?
I pushed and pushed and finally broke her out
I looked back and forth
Look what I let take over
I gotta go get my life back in order

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  1. Date: 3/29/2010 10:29:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Christy. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol