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A Love Betrayed

Just when the flame of her tender passion began to bloom into a relationship that she could finally cherish, Her affection turned to abomination and scorn When his attempt to bamboozle her backfired His struggle to win her back was in vain Though he had a yearning for her deep in his inner soul But the bitter taste of betrayal Killed all chances of reconciliation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/13/2012 11:06:00 PM
Joseph, I thought I was keeping up on all your posts, but here is one I had missed. This poem strongly depicts love's betrayal.
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Date: 11/9/2012 10:47:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Joseph. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:38:00 PM
Ah, those women, never know what they will do next. But, he's probably better off without her; time to move on! Nice one Joe
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