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A Lost Soul Imprisoned

I am a lonely castaway On an Island in the wind I'm surfing on a cloud A prisoner locked within I'm locked in a dark gray cell The key it can't be found Held captive, I'm imprisoned In a world that knows no sound People walk right passed me Through these walls they can not see Someday someone somewhere Will finally rescue me The insanity becomes horrendous Appalling as it seems This world in which detests me so Will haunt my every dream Will they ever find me Tomorrow's another chance A soul that's lost in some far cosmos In some hypnotic trance

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Date: 1/31/2017 7:44:00 AM
The imprisoned feel expressed so rhyming swell. 'A soul that's lost in some far cosmos ' wow your poem is artsy fantastic such that it brightens the gloomy content. Great flow too.Kudos.
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 1/31/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. This poem was straying away from my comfort zone.
Date: 1/29/2017 9:02:00 PM
Oh ok good :)
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Date: 1/29/2017 8:53:00 PM
This is deep. Somewhere someone will find you and hand over to you your key of happiness :)
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Date: 1/29/2017 8:57:00 PM
I really can't say for sure where this poem came from. The words just started coming and I wrote them down as quick as possible. I really am a happy person. Thanks for the comment very much.

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