Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


CRYSTAL MAAHI Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A LOST SMILE which was written by poet CRYSTAL MAAHI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



+ Fav Poet


I think of all my smiles that I've worn,
which hide my sorrows underneath.
No one seems to notice that ,
I'm going through so much grief.
I cry and cry inside my pretty little tired eyes,
no one actually seems to realize,
what is presently going inside.
I'm going far away from everyone.
That no one seems to see my real pain.
My heart is totally broken after so much suffering,
unable to face anyone.
It feels like it's the last of my life,
As i have got no support by my side. 
I have really started to abhor myself and
have started to find things quite uncertain.
I find people to be quite ignorant towards me,
as it is,i know they are idyllic without me.
I am very puzzled at present,
What to do?Is my situation.
I only meet illusive people in this inconsiderate world.
I am such a numpty person,
 that in this world expect people to know my situation.
After knowing as it is they would remain ignoramuses.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 8:33:00 PM
    Wonderful work - I loved the poem. I can relate to it. Your rhymes flow well additionally. Keep up the fantastic work : ) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Ps., Your Beautiful Avatar Is Extremely Stirring Towards One's Heart ˜ Welcome To Her Loving PoetrySoup.

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:05:00 PM
    † Not All, Not All! This Deeply Touching Painting Makes Myself Think Of Puddle Of Mud's Song 'Blurry,' Wherein These Lyrics Echo Many And Many A Life Amid This Day As Age: Everyones So Empty And Everyones So Fake There's No One Left That's Real ? Yet We Know That There Are But Still, Governments As Lawyers As Law As Rulers As Dictators ? Have Stripped Hearts Spirits Lives Her World And All Within It, With Their Blind In Self Serving Ignorance; Turning Their Backs Upon Both Heaven And, 'Our Beautiful Loving Father!' * Creating Their Own Hell, On Earth.... ˜ Love John

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Mahimma, congratulations..... Love ~~SKAT~~

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:25:00 PM
    hello Mahima, wow... this poem made it on another it... , Congratulations on your win... awesome Teenager Entertainment poem.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Hello Mahima, this is the poem you are talking of... .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 4:07:00 PM
    I remember feeling this way as a teen-ie-bopper! Thanks this is a great poem.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:26:00 PM
    so many emotions run through a teenagers head and the peer pressure and trying to fit in can be draining...nice work, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Mahima though you did lose me a little towards the end I do appreciate how you expressed the emptiness and sadness of trying to be happy for those around you; especially when you feel some should know you better. Thank you for sharing this with us :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Do peopletake the fact that this is actually really bad poetry into consideration despite the she's young? Should we then take into consideration poetry by bad poets because they lack the intelligence to create something good, and say that it's good considering who wrote it? no, bad poetry is bad poetry, sorry, however don't be discouraged, just know you need to better yourself and that you probably can.

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 10/28/2013 1:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ....then maybe try proof reading your ignorant comments next time. Then perhaps you may appear to have at least finished high school.
    Žilic Avatar Nikola Žilic
    Date: 10/28/2013 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Should I have dipped it in sugar first perhaps? Reality is harsh, besides, if I consider something completely helpless I don't even bother to write my (upper case letters) opinion.
    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 10/27/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nikola to critique is one thing to disparage is another! Your OPINION, as it is, should not have been voiced so harshly! SHAME ON YOU!!
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 2:42:00 PM
    I have felt like this before. Until you truly realize that someone out there does care. This is a wonderful poem and it is well expressed.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Feeling this way, you are now ready to be a poet. Good luck.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 12:40:00 PM
    A smile can't be criticize ..... Your 1st poem start with smile.Hope you will always maintain your smile.Great job

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Mahima, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:56:00 PM
    It was nice hearing from you Mahima, hope you post another poem soon... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Hello Mahima, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Mahima ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)