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A Loser Once More

A loser once more. Somehow, it happened again. Oh so foolish me. I thought I could win money. History repeats itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2012 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Robert ha ha, that'll teach you to keep your hand on you halfpenny xx
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Robert. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:31:00 AM
congrats on your win! I like the berating, melancholy tone of this. good one :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:27:00 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON A TREMENDOUS TANKA AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/21/2012 2:47:00 PM
I am fortunate to have not inherited my Mother's love of gambling, many congrats on your win Robert
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:54:00 AM
Robert, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:49:00 PM
Robert, i wonder if history has a way of knowing what will concur. Or is it just us finding our ways to the same ol' same ol'..love your poem...pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:06:00 PM
Yeah, my parents used to frequent the casinos, and they lost a lot of the time! I don't bother with them...I never win so why just give them my money? I'd rather keep the money for myself and buy a meal for my family or something! Your poem successfully expressed the desire to win money but you see that you lose time and time again! What a delightful write my friend! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
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