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A Long Time Ago In the Future of Things

A long time ago in the future of things, Two fish were swimming with feathery wings. They dove so far down to end up in the sky, And became so joyous that they just had to cry. They loved each other so they felt they had to say Why dear you’re looking incredibly awful today! They kissed each other while whispering screams, And while awake saw each other in dreams. They quietly shouted of their simple love, And embraced each other with a tender shove!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations Sasha on your win in Kristen Bruni's contest "Oxymoronica". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your terrific win!!! Hooray for you!! Good job, Sasha!
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congrats, Sasha on your well deserved first place win. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:37:00 PM
Congrats Sasha on your first place win in Kristen's contest with this terrific write and entry luv.. enjoy your top spot ...
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Date: 2/1/2011 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Sasha
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:37:00 PM
No wonder you won the top spot with this entry. This is a fine example of a set of self-contradictory lines.
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:36:00 AM
this is sure to win, i love it!
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Date: 1/29/2011 10:27:00 AM
Lol this is wonderful, great use of opposites! I hope you win the contest!
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Date: 1/29/2011 10:27:00 AM
Oops, don't think I voted! Here ya go!
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Date: 1/25/2011 8:53:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Sasha. I hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:18:00 PM
that was just wonderful, love it
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