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A Long Night

A Long Night Walking down by the water’s edge, I sense the lingering crush of emotion. With each footstep my heart begins to beg, Raging against me like a powerful ocean. Tossing and turning inside my mind, It fills up with so much static. Wanting nothing more than for my light to shine, My body starts shaking in withdraws like an addict. Sweat wells on my cold forehead, It makes my body tingle, Did I say all I should have said? Our words flowed like strangers trying to mingle. Laughter feels absent within these walls, The living has gone without a thought. Shouting in the night and waiting for a return call, This long night alone for us was for naught…

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Date: 9/17/2010 2:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your stay on soup is a fun one... check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Moncie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 4:26:00 AM
Moncie, there will be other nights, and other great poems for you to write. Well done, here. Welcome to poetrysoup, I shall be honored to call you friend
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