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A Long Long Time Ago

A long long time ago, actually it was much further back than that No one really knows the date as it's become just a human stat Somewhere out there, the universe was set alive And it's taken millions of years to realise it's not our prize It's so hard to get your head around, the events on that day Where science as we know it, raised it's head to say From the particle dust, as it swirls in past eons of time Planets that we have come to know, or we'll discover as our space age climbs They said we would never find water, on the Moon or the planet Mars Deep inside our sleeping satellite, behind those lunar scars Only a few years back, we impeded on it's crater scarred scape And followed up with a probe, and the readings we can now relate To leave our planet earth, rocket propulsion desires water It's part of mans science mix, to the universe and her daughters What we have discovered is not much, it could be enough for our very next step If we actually agree to behave ourselves, the very next step is not so inept A long long time ago, actually it was much further back than that All that us humans dream, will become our histories stats

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Date: 10/25/2010 5:58:00 PM
wonderful insightful piece, much enjoyed, thank you for your kind comments on my work James , have a beautiful week ahead of you
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Date: 10/25/2010 8:39:00 AM
James, Wonderful write, what a wake up call. As always Shar Thank you for your kind words........
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Date: 10/25/2010 6:26:00 AM
Very enlightening thoughts on the universe, James
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:20:00 AM
what an extraordinary piece of work...i admire the way you combine poetry and facts...
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:37:00 PM
You've been doing some deep thinking about the origins of the universe and man's potential for exploration, James. Our knowledge of space science seems to be growing at a very slow rate, but I do think our "next step" will be a visit to Mars. Enjoyed this poem very much! Love, Carolyn
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