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A Lonely Silver Ribbon

A lonely silver ribbon Caught my eye today A remnant of a shopper’s rush Left on the shelf to say I can sparkle, take me home My Christmas plans are few And I would relish nothing more Than wrapping gifts for you So as it spoke in ribbon speak Calling out my name I thought of how I’d once felt Not chosen for a game I bought that silver ribbon And took it home with me And now it sits so sparkling bright Underneath my tree If people were like ribbon Perhaps, we’d keep in mind That Christmas can be lonely When you’re left behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/1/2017 11:12:00 PM
I love your twists and wrap-up. Great delivery, Mike. I think it's awesome to think of lonely people, particularly during the holidays. I'm making this a FAVE. Thanks, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/17/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thank ao much Line xxoo
Date: 11/30/2017 1:24:00 PM
Yes Mike and so many go thtough this... so many are alone and feel worse im thos season... nice use of metaphor..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thanks , Silent One !!
Date: 11/30/2017 10:32:00 AM
Loooooove this Mike!!!! Especially the last stanza that brings it all home. Awesome write! ~ Judy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 11:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Judy xxoo
Date: 11/30/2017 10:05:00 AM
This is a lovely poem Mike and so true. Happy Thursday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi, xxoo Happy Thursday!!

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