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A Lonely Evening

In many dreams of you, I wish If I could get my hands on the wings If only I could come over to you now, It would be the best moment in my life. Alone in a cool evening With the light of a candle and the breeze from afar And then the moment would draw close And the night would become our friend And nature would support our breathe And our dream would seem simple And nightmare be far from us For the moment would be the beginning of a new era And the dawn would bring joy Happiness and love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/10/2016 2:27:00 PM
this is a deep first poem... enjoyed reading.. always ~SKAT
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:58:00 PM
Hi Philip,, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
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Date: 9/19/2014 9:43:00 PM
a dream of a memory to make. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/19/2014 5:44:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Philip
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Date: 9/16/2014 5:51:00 PM
Hello Philip, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:40:00 PM
Hi Philip, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 9/14/2014 2:36:00 PM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Philip - I choose your first moving and well written sonnet - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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