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A Local Lass

A local lass, sang in the bar How she could hold a tune. When she sang, her silken voice Entranced the crowded room. A guitar strummed, a tambourine crashed There were strains of a violin, But above it all, this young girls voice Soft, and sweet as sin. Her hypnotic voice filled the air, As she sang out, threw back her hair, Frenzied feet stamped the floor, They clapped so hard, their hands were sore. She had the menfolk in her spell, This village girl, so young and sweet. For when this lass gave them a song, She had them falling at her feet.

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Date: 11/13/2016 12:19:00 AM
Great imagery! :) Made me smile!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/13/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Arthur.
Date: 11/12/2016 4:15:00 PM
She must have the voice of an angel Gary - beautifully penned rhyme thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Jan.

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