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A Little Prick

The doctor says I need a shot For something that I have not got The nurse takes aim As if to maim And I should tell them, "Thanks a lot!"?

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Date: 10/7/2022 6:18:00 AM
Perfect limerick. Thanks for the laugh..
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/8/2022 11:10:00 AM
You are welcome! Stay safe! Aloha!
Date: 10/3/2022 11:00:00 AM
Rico, I loved your hilarious Limerick. You are an expert at writing poems of this form, and it is clear that you have a fantastic sense of humor. Regards
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Date: 10/1/2022 12:10:00 AM
Why should you thank them...Instead they should be thankful to each other..... Quite funny Rico
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Date: 9/30/2022 9:40:00 AM
Perfect title. You've probably increased your readership at least tenfold, Rico. (still chuckling) Oh, enjoyed the limerick, too.
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:18:00 PM
At least this one was given in one of your arms You didn't have to lower your pants and show all your charms Your limericks are wonderful Rico. Always topical and always enjoyed.
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Date: 9/29/2022 2:18:00 PM
great poem, rico, with the perfect title!
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Date: 9/29/2022 11:05:00 AM
My daughter once jumped (because her brother scared her) inoculating the nurse. LOL!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 4:58:00 PM
LOL, Rico!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/29/2022 11:12:00 AM
At the age of two, my granddaughter simply yanked the needle out of her arm and nurse's hand, and tossed it across the room. One thing is certain: pharmaceuticals prosper! Aloha!

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