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A Little Laughter Five

Ocean trout lurks close folks tread ocean water trout makes fishy prank music folks shark alert hears scary movie theme folks panic…scram water guard hears trout laugh sandy beach folks towel dance drips, quake, shake... faint 2-20-18

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Susan Gentry

Date: 3/27/2018 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/27/2018 9:39:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Susan; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2018 2:28:00 AM

Congratulations Cheryl. Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/27/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2018 4:30:00 PM

very funny Che:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:02:00 PM

hugs che xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:01:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Jan; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2018 7:29:00 AM

Cheryl, congratulations on your win on this great piece! :) Hugs Eve

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; really appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/25/2018 10:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Cheryl, congratulations so much with your fun winning poem :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Ann-Lise; really appreciate it! hugs~Che :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 3/25/2018 10:30:00 AM

Good morning Cheryl how are you today? Trout makes fishy prank music! that's a great line. Congratulations on your win and thank you for taking time to enter the contest. Edward. {:-)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/26/2018 8:20:00 AM

Belated Good morning Edward;Thanks so much for very kind congrats and for placing me as on of the winners Edward; really appreciate it! Thanks again!~Che :)

Constance La France

Date: 2/22/2018 7:42:00 PM

Cheryl, such a difficult contest to write for, best of luck with your fun poem !

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/24/2018 7:38:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Broken Wings; really appreciate it!~Che :) PS It was difficult only being able to use five letter words, aargh! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/22/2018 7:50:00 AM

Lol! Cheryl, This is hilarious. I enjoyed it very much.You should see the images in my head. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/22/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind encouraging comment Alexis; Glad you enjoyed and got chuckle out of it! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 2/21/2018 7:49:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha, love it, Cheryl. // Barry

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/21/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Barry; glad you enjoyed it! Originally I had a shark scaring them but decided to change it to a trout~appreciate the stop by!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2018 1:53:00 AM

Soon as I started reading, the theme to Jaws was playing in my head. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/21/2018 6:54:00 AM

Thats what I usually imagine hearing whenever I take an ocean dip lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)