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A Little Girls Journey

A little Girl’s Journey A little girl’s day dream of her first train ride A journey filled with laughter, fun, comfort, and ease Her heart does a small leap With butterflies on daisies teasing her tummy Excited with glee barely able to sleep with thoughts on her mind ~ Does a big giant clock make the train run? How about if it winds down and runs out of time, do they have to rewind it again? Does it get mad because it’s lost its pace and bellows smoke out its stack? Would I be able to feel the cool breeze flow through the open window upon my face? Will we be racing a cross-country a hundred miles an hour watching the trees wheeze by? Do we get a glimpsed of livestock and animals grazing in the countryside? Can I give a friendly wave and say hello to all the people? ~ She carries a basket of cheese, cherries, cookies, and brownies Waiting impatiently with each passing second Drowsily she lays her head on a pillow against the window adrift in sweet dreams with her long beautiful wavy red hair draped over her shoulder Awaking to the echoes of people chattering, The whistle and the screeching sounds of the train coming to a halt arriving at the end of her journey approximately at the right time © 8/5/2015

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Date: 8/10/2015 11:57:00 PM
Excellent pen Eve!I enjoyed this one my friend.A 7!Thank you for your visit and commenting on my poem.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thank you ,Dorian,for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/5/2015 8:26:00 PM
Could picture it all, enjoyed
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2015 8:19:00 AM
Thank you ,Shirley, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/5/2015 3:59:00 PM
a simply charming tale Eve - loved the vivid imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2015 8:18:00 AM
Thank you ,Jan, Hugs Eve

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