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A Little Girl and a Little Deer

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A little deer, a little girl Her towel lays on the ground Dropped in her excitement When the little fawn she found The fawn had wandered from her Mum She saw the little girl Stood there at the garden's edge Her senses in a whirl She felt that humans may be bad That did not seem so here A little girl with arms outstretched It dispelled all her fear They came together, cuddled up She lifted the fawns head Gave her a kiss, like her Mum did Before she went to bed Could they be friends for ever now It could be so, and yet It may be just one episode A glimpse is all you get

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Date: 4/28/2020 11:33:00 PM
Hello Warren … certainly a bright little poem, totally positive, and very enjoyable as a children's poem - well done Warren - Lindsay
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Warren Mbaht
Date: 4/28/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Lindsay, very much appreciated

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