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A Little Boy's Hope

His castle surveys the morning sky before the gauntlet of daylight falls. And stands guard, least a dragon fly by this wooden fortress with rough-hewn walls. Windows direct dawn's first beams of light to a boy with a mischievous grin. And on waking from the spell of night the master of this realm stirs within. A rickety outhouse guards its flanks while a rusty smoke stack crowns its peak. And strange symbols scratched upon its planks welcome the innocent and the weak. Goblins agree to keep their distance, for fairies have vowed to guard this fort. And aware of this knight's resistance, demons cut their shenanigans short. Its sheets of cardboard protect and warm, keeping out the ghosts that feed on fear. And built from logs, it'll thwart any storm or the odd monster that may appear. Every weathered board and worn-out knot lets his imagination run wild. And tells a story of battles fought as its magic entertains this child. In this shack of mostly logs and tar, his family finds it hard to cope. And before this knight's dreams drift too far, poverty steals a little boy's hope. (Rhyme) 10/30/2016

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Date: 3/18/2018 9:45:00 PM
An epic read. Fascinating, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/6/2016 1:43:00 AM
Beautifully written, Emile, very moving. A fine write. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/6/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your input and praise. Emile.
Date: 10/30/2016 7:35:00 PM
I have to agree with Carol, very well written Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/31/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, you always bring a smile to my day my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/30/2016 5:36:00 PM
"Poverty steals a little boy's hope" really tugs at the heartstrings this poem. Such a great poem and rhyme:)
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Carol, your input is most welcome. Emile.

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