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A Little Boy Plays

A little boy plays quietly on the floor, as an elderly woman walks through the door. The little boy turns a smile on his face, then the smile vanishes without a trace. He says " I thought mommy was here to play", please tell me when mommy will be home to stay. The older woman with tears in her eyes, can only answer the boy with unsure lies. She tells him soon so have no fear, your mommy loves you and will soon be here. So with a glimer of hope in this inocent heart, he waits for the day him and his mommy are no longer apart. By: Angela Holcomb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sad but often true to life poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:29:00 PM
such longing, a very dear write, congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congrats Angela on your wonderful win for this excellent poetry in the contest luv..enjoy..
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Judy's "Monopoly" contest Angela. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:57:00 AM
Many congrats Angela on clinching second spot in Judy's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:55:00 AM
My co0ngratulations on the secondplace win in the contest, Angela
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:30:00 PM
Creative and interesting write with nice expressions, Angela
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site and contests as u continue to share with luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:36:00 PM
I can actually feel the emotion is this! Very good write! Curtis
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:15:00 PM
Creative and expressive write, Angela
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:42:00 PM
touching and warm and a child's heart waits. very good write.
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:26:00 PM
* “Tis Very Lovely * Stirring * Tender * Sweeet * But Ow Sooo Quickly Amid This Place We Walk * Is Innocence Stripped Away * One Layer At A Time * Wonderful Poem. * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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