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A Lion Looms Listless

A cold lion roams, doctrinaire and sterile, The expanse of Africa offers him no sanctuary, the Saringehti no salvation, He can only smell the scent of his pride now, his cubs shun him, Repelled by needless roars, the revolting rants, Tail tattered, biten by jackels at will, His nose bit and beaten from battles better avoided, Soul tethered to a label, only a title, "King of the Jungle" , Fleas and insects of all sorts find haven in his muddy mane once so puffed and wide like a thunderhead trampling over Tanzania, I hear him in the twilight, lonely, unsated and undesired, Paranoid about a life that does not seem to love him, His heart became a desserted Athens, a broken, rigid column slumped on the earth, He wanders near the Nile, nearsighted and nervous As an Egyptian boy of ancient lineage stalks him sensitively Putting the speartip to his temple saying, I see your ribs, your broken paws, your futility, I will now deliver your soul unto the cool night, The spear is launched with a certain bloodlust piercing behind the shoulder blade, his heart hollers with the cry of scarred suprise, the lion stumbles and pants vanity no allowing blame for lack of vigilance, the boy trots to the spot, kneels in token reverence telling him, sip the black puddle of your error, as eyes fold ever shallow, let me feed you these apples of arrogance so to quiet your grievence, to sooth your ego before final sight, there is no shame in being slain by a Pharoah King, old lion, I shall wear your teeth as a timeless trophy of tragedy, Emblematical of Pride gone on too long, may the spirit of Herodetous teach this lesson to a new breed - J.A.B.

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Date: 6/10/2014 5:19:00 PM
"I shall wear your teeth as a timeless trophy of tragedy, Emblematical of Pride gone on too long" -- Wow... simply floored by the power in those words. Excellent write, Justin. - Raven
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/10/2014 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Raven, I do indeed treasure physical and mental mementos that I have accumulated throughout my life, reminding me of my victories and failures, things that teach about the meaning of life, and of the exquisite natures of people I learn of. I understand, that one need not agree with someone, or something to learn from it. This adversary is valued by me. J.A.B.
Date: 3/17/2014 2:37:00 PM
Happy Saint Patty's day.. I'm looking and admiring the rose and the color. I'm also reading, your words that cut, and put one in place. I like what you said... Paranoid about a life that does not seem to love him,"" that's covered everything about this poor soul.... Enjoy your day.. xox~ Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/17/2014 11:13:00 PM
That what I say when I stare at you Linda, in regards to the Rose. J.A.B.
Date: 3/4/2014 9:08:00 PM
Wow. Stunning beauty and imagry. Ever a master of his art
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Justin Bordner
Date: 3/5/2014 12:06:00 AM
You makin me feel like a King tonight. Even a Master must revisit old lessons to remain motivated and true. Its real good to hear from you, thanks. J.A.B.
Date: 1/22/2014 3:24:00 AM
Wow Justin! Just wow! Fantastic use of imagery. Lions symbolize courage but there are those who would sooner spear those who dare so much as rise up in rebellion to the evils of this world. Just as lions are continuously hunted so are brave men and women. This is a powerful write.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/23/2014 1:08:00 AM
I truly respect the angle of your honor and altruism regarding the interpretation of this poem Vicky. There are times when our adversaries are also great teachers for us. Thanks for the kind comments. J.A.B.
Date: 1/21/2014 1:22:00 PM
WOW! I'll watch out for you and the spear held in your hand. Well, I hope this trophy of yours changes his pace. After all your being kind enough delivering his soul into the cool night. Adding this to my favorites. I think I know what you are talking about. I think! Love ~SKAT~
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/22/2014 2:12:00 AM
Glad I wowed you Skat, no worries dear poetess, I would only use my spear to save you, never to injure. This write is a true victory for me, thank Deity, a victory over hate. Thanks for the love, and thanks for breathing life into the 'Soup' ! J.A.B.
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Date: 1/21/2014 1:23:00 PM
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Date: 1/20/2014 7:06:00 PM
Great imagery loved it's realism, this is a true write of an end old lions demise at the end of life enjoyed this so much, and thanks for your comments on mine also. cheri
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/21/2014 12:40:00 PM
So glad I got you to see something wild and meaningful Cheri. Your writing style is very unique. J.A.B.
Date: 1/20/2014 6:28:00 PM
Hey there.. first and foremost, thanks yet again for the thoughtful review on my poems. Decrepit Canyons means a lot to me, and I am glad you liked it. Now , to THIS poem. Wow. "His heart became a desserted Athens, a broken, rigid column slumped on the earth," what a line my dear clever friend. Immense piece to a majestic creature. Can really larn a lot from him, can't we? Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/21/2014 12:37:00 PM
Hey, you've got an orignal vision, an original emotion to your work Larua, its an inspiration. Yeah that line really defines the subject my friend. Pride is essential to success, but unbridled pride leads to arrogance towards others too, in turn minimizing our wisdom. J.A.B.
Date: 1/19/2014 6:50:00 PM
Hello Justin, Tame them stripes... LOL, On a serious note, Some boys don't belong in a world so strong. Arrogance, will get certain boys nowhere, but on a gunman's mantel. It's a shame, when someones ego is hung nicely over the lions den. Always... LINDA
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/20/2014 12:39:00 PM
A shame, or a fair fate, let Deity decide I suppose. We all have a time to be taught, and a time to teach. Your comment is right on target Linda, thank you. J.A.B.
Date: 1/19/2014 5:37:00 AM
I have pictures and paintings of lions all over my living spaces...in my office, my home. There is something so majestic and beautiful about this creature. This epic poem of yours has captured his majesty well and yet, a lion too can be a prey...I do see the deeper meanings here. Your command of history is very praise worthy. Great job
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Date: 1/19/2014 1:32:00 PM
The lion engenders all potential power, and vulnerability that we as humans can be Eileen. Thank you so much for reizing the entirety of this important write, a moral within a liberty. I am humbled by your compliments. J.A.B.

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