Get Your Premium Membership

A Lifetime of Cars

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.


Could not find exact replicas of my favorite cars except for the bottom one (my least favorite). The next to last one is of ME and the REAL Mitsubishi I drove five years ago!

 

Gotta get back a CONVERTIBLE TOP!!!

I did not learn to drive until my twenties. My two poor kids I hauled inside a wagon! That wagon creaked when filled with groceries! Fed up, I said, “My kids I won’t be draggin’!” I got my license at age twenty-four. We didn’t have much money, and I think I got a car whose kind is found no more - a Monza, and it’s shade was rosy pink! It cost me Fifteen-hundred, and I thought I’d own it for a while, but here’s the fact: A lemon was that first car that I’d bought. We took a family trip; its block was cracked! It broke down on the freeway. Lucky me! Not drivable, it was not worth repairing. I talked my hubbie into something pretty - another car with me he’d not be sharing. It was an old white Mustang, not too bad. But something sure was wrong. It liked to die at almost each long stop. DANG, I’d been had! At busy intersections, I’d almost cry! We tried to fix it, but it never seemed to stay fixed long, and so I saved my money to buy the kind of car of which I’d dreamed. At last I found HER. She was a honey! The car for me was one I could adore - a used Camaro - sporty and baby blue. I can’t recall, but maybe she was 2-door and she did not break down; that car stayed true! I drove her out to California when we moved out there; but one day at the wheel I got crashed by a crazy trucker. Then my sweet car was repaired and painted teal! Gone now was that baby blue I’d flaunted. Her miles too were getting very high. We moved back to our old state; I wanted to trade her in before she chanced to die! My next used car was nice, but in my eyes It wasn’t ME; it had no sporty feel. New Yorker was its name, a compromise in gray! I searched for one I’d like for real! And then I saw another “she,” an utter beauty, a white convertible with black top. For weeks she sat for sale. Heart a-flutter, I bought that Mustang, cream of the used crop! I always bought my cars a wee bit old to save on cost, and this one had some miles. I dressed her up; her wheels got trimmed in gold. When folks yelled out, “Nice car,” I was all smiles! I loved that Mustang, so I then had made a license plate called Andie55. I’d put the top down; in that car I played with wind that tossed my hair. I felt alive! At last the time arrived to trade her in. A hundred thousand miles on cars concerns me. A beige convertible then made me grin - A Spyder Eclipse by Mitsubishi. I got some heads turned driving her but missed my gold-trimmed Mustang, and my tall spouse Joe felt cramped when in that car; it made him pissed! She too got old and then she had to go. The car I’m driving now is halfway to the time its warranty’s set to expire. In five more years I know just what I’ll do about the time that folks my age retire! I bought my Kia Forte just to please my husband, and it’s been an OK car, but I want something more than driving ease. A SHE car is a better one by far!! That license plate made just for me is gone. Though Kia‘s the first brand new car I‘ve bought, the kind of car I want to put back on my ANDIE55 is a car I’ll love a LOT! for the Women Only (WOULD YOU, COULD YOU) Write About Cars Contest of PD and Skat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/9/2016 10:37:00 PM
What a lengthy story of all the cars that came and went through your life ... entertaining (even if I'm not that interested in cars). Glad this contest went by me .... I would have failed miserably. Lol.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2016 10:06:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2016 12:32:00 AM
Ditch the Kia. You are definitely Mustang. Congrats, Andrea! Viv x
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2016 11:32:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your win. Love **SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2016 10:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is a PD contest. LOL, Not SKAT, she's still around last I checked. Anyways, I don't like convertibles. However, I love your entry. More I like that you added a photo of you and your car above.. How cute. :) :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2016 5:28:00 PM
I read this last night, but didn't have time to comment. What a memory you have concerning your auto history! I don't know that I could mentally put all mine in order, but I have never owned a ford and you do love that mustang! Next convertible purchase, come get me and we'll do that Thelma and Louise thing (except the end part). Good writing, Sweetie ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2016 10:59:00 AM
You even make talking about cars interesting.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2015 9:06:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you car poem, Andrea! Nicely done and very interesting! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2015 6:37:00 PM
Do you by any chance remember that silly series my mother's a car with jerry van dyke. Great job on this, you kept me interested all the way through. Got to add it to my list.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2015 9:53:00 PM
I didn't think I could love a Car poem, you proved me wrong! They say Cars help a guy meet woman, well I know why I am single now! https://ourmanintbilisi.files.wordpress.com/2008/09/lada1.jpg
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2015 11:05:00 AM
Yep! Our first car was a lemon too, a red Chevie that ate more oil than gasoline. We had a Volkswagen bug for a long time - 36 horses. You could put a new engine in her for $250.00. Luck with your latest. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2015 6:40:00 AM
Nice adventure Andrea. I sometimes miss my old black Cavalier Convertible, too. I'll never have another one.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2015 4:20:00 AM
Wonderful poem Andrea.. Gl in contest! I haven't yet started working on the subject!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2015 7:43:00 PM
Full of memories happy and sad, Good Luck in the contest, SuZ
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2015 1:58:00 PM
- A long journey in Andres car world ........... I think mine would become even longer :) - Enjoy reading with a smile :) - Good luck in the contest and with your new Kia‘s :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2015 11:54:00 AM
Nice trip around your mad mad world of cars, good luck..with the contest and your car.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things