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A Letter To Mrs. Frankenstein Phd

Tonight I speak to you, with a sober mind that keeps my memories vivid, and a melancholy mood that reflects the deepest darkest depths of my dangerous depression, Sealed with heartache Stamped with the hurtful indiscretions of a man made ignorant by the reality of a loss that eradicated his soul, Be it prudent to allow my reminiscence to fade into the infinite background of forgotten brooded teenage angst My memories are empowered by love, and by such an emotion, have denied my will and become personified to the point of eternal embodiment, grabbing my tongue and squeezing out ink used to express the immortal affection of its own first and only creed, Thus by the mutual compassion once held by our hearts alike, The monster of your imagination was born to a world incapable of comprehending the love of a creature for the love of his creator, A creature who hides his face for he is hideous without you, Crushed by the harrowing lightening strike of being condemned to a life without the bolt of love that gave him breath, he becomes the lost, Yet he devotedly searches for you, as I do, as we both breakdown screaming and crying out loud, in harmony, "Creator, please... Love me again.."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 7:52:00 PM
Your words always have such impact and realism in a way that amazes me each time I read your pieces, you have desire and devotion for sure and talent,,well that goes without saying, you have showed feelings of Frankenstein fantastically,,anyone who ever really and truly watched the movie instead of being scared, the message within is glorious of love and wanting love from their creator to which every spiritual human desires as well,,Thank You again for reading and your comments,,Blessings,cecil
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:54:00 PM
remember always beauty needs an animal to breath. this was powerful work my dear friend! you never cease to amaze me with your work. so many scrumptious lines my mind feasted upon in this poem. it was a very creative piece worthy of much applause. the last line was so heartbreaking and so true for both the world in this poem and in our everyday world in life. you will go far Audonus, your words tell us that much. may there be so many more pieces of equal greatness for you. --madison
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Date: 11/8/2010 6:05:00 PM
PASSIONATE! no better words to say it.
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:30:00 AM
You my new friend are a true talent.. This is a wondeful piece you have written... And once again you are to kind with your coments..a philospher?? thats a first.. but like you I would love to hear it on the radio.... thanks again... my artist friend.. Michael
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:31:00 PM
A truly wonderful poem. Thanks.
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:46:00 PM
Now this is awesome, the title had me wondering. the ending is perfect, what one longs for or not. Enjoyed your poem. have a nice one,, time too ooooo go read myself a rap,,, curios what it shall look like in a poem. don't read many of them on here.... bye,..p.d.
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your works....you have alot of talent!!
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