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A Lesson Learned

You all asked for my help I did everything in my power for you Now you have turned your back on me Used for your gain now you rid yourself of me I will not judge you, I leave that to the higher power

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Andrew Crisci

Date: 10/14/2012 1:43:00 PM

Congratulations, Carol on your poetry being featured this week. You have shown us that you are the kind of believer that leaves the judgement to God. It is the right thing to do. Have a great Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.

Diane Christian

Date: 10/12/2012 12:15:00 AM

a lovey poem, congrats on your feature too

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/11/2012 8:19:00 PM

A good lesson by example...congratulations on your featured poem this week.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/11/2012 10:23:00 AM

Yes! What's the bible say - "Judge not that ye be not judged." Tell 'em to take something large and put it where the moon don't shine. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Richard J. Long

Date: 10/10/2012 5:59:00 PM

Who needs revenge- when the almighty deals out justice. Nice drama and a lot of fun! Thanks for your comments! Peace Richard

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2012 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your powerful poem being featured this week on soup, Carol! Love, Annalise

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/9/2012 2:39:00 PM

Very nice poem! Congrats on being featured... Terry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 8:33:00 AM

Thank you all for reading and commenting. Love, Carol

Maria Maria

Date: 2/5/2012 7:48:00 AM

a lot of truth in your words , some people come in our lives like blessing and other like lessons

Vennie Burns

Date: 11/12/2011 9:45:00 AM

Learning never stops... There are ups and downs in all of us... I'm glad to see that you know when things are left in prayer... The out come seems better for us and our spiritual balance... Thanks for all your comments and keep your good heart... we need more of them!

Don Johnson

Date: 10/27/2011 5:41:00 AM

Sometimes users do enthrall, and take advantage, its their call, but judgement waits, on another date, their persecution, is their fate, thats allllll...

M.I.A .

Date: 10/25/2011 9:13:00 PM

read from Darkened Day till I Am Not Afraid and found this sense of growth in you and your art that makes it have a different edge. It is always an honor to see someone's opening heart. always the best wishes

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/22/2011 9:45:00 PM

thankxx Carol for all your congrats and wonderful words on my poetry my friend.. so happy PS is running smoothly once again.. hope all is well with u luv..

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 10/21/2011 4:46:00 PM

hi carol so sorry to read this but that's just the way some people are it's sad but true trust me I live it all the time I'am tired of being ran all over. hope you are well miss you so much and I do appreciate everything you did for me and always will have a great weekend love you faleshia;

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2011 9:52:00 AM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, holding grudges or holding anger toward a person doesn't work..Sometimes it is hard to let go but that is best..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2011 9:53:00 AM

Forgot to say thanks for the faithfulness in commenting on my work..Your kind reviews are truly appreciated..Sara

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/13/2011 1:04:00 PM

it's hard to believe anyone would turn their back on you - you're too sweet! just remember, this site is for poetry and yours is beautiful, just like you :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/13/2011 1:00:00 PM

Hi! Friend, you are complaining to the higher power. No way is there except that. I do too. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for giving congratulation to me. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/13/2011 12:08:00 PM

oh no Carol..what happened now? I cannot imagine anyone would turn on a lovely creative artist as u my friend.. attacks occur everywhere in life ..even in poetry it seems.. I have had my share.. did u delete all your work? oh no..

Tony Lane

Date: 10/12/2011 8:37:00 PM

Always and forever. Tony

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/12/2011 2:08:00 PM

You have done nothing wrong! :-) It was others who have done wrong.Honesty is the best policy.We just need to let things cool down thats all.I will be here for you always....How could anybody not love such a kind hearted person? :-)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/12/2011 1:22:00 PM

I would never turn my back on you Carol! You a sweet and kind person and I love getting wonderful remarks from you in most of my poems! I also enjoy your writes of which I like to leave comments for your works! Thanks for everything you have done in my poetic life!! Awesome job!!

Tim B

Date: 10/12/2011 1:18:00 PM

Ahhh may righteous fury fall upon those who have wronged you Mrs. Carol. Well written, leave it to the lord to dole out justice!