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A Lecherous Neophyte

A lecherous neophyte he preyed upon their folded hands and closed eyes bathed in their dolorous mumblings sated himself on their penitential inhibition Left them to flounder hopelessly - adrift drowning in his vitriolic bombast a hard burning scent of incense left to smolder in their souls for Providence had delivered them - to him ©6/16/2019 Eight word free verse challenge Poetry Contest John Hamilton sponsor

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Date: 6/21/2019 12:33:00 PM
Nice one John congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 6/16/2019 8:55:00 PM
well done, John, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/16/2019 8:45:00 PM
sounds like somebody passing 'anti- religious?' symbol legislation...when all the while they're supporting some other kind of identity bullshit
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John Lawless
Date: 6/18/2019 1:44:00 PM
Not sure if this is a comment, criticism, or judgement

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