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A leaves goodbye

Catastrophe, no I'm not bitter The wind caresses my margins Children tickle my cold veins I float to the terrain For Oak Kin to thrive I say crisply I'm charcoal Goodbye Time

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Date: 12/21/2023 8:02:00 AM
I love the rawness and personified imagery of this, how you’ve placed you thoughts to a realm of leaves bidding farewell is so very impressive. Beautiful flow and syllables on point. “ The wind caresses my margins :Children tickle my cold veins “ this stood out the most for me!!! So creative! Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win. Wishing you beautiful holidays ahead
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Date: 12/15/2023 4:32:00 PM
Nice to meet you Sabrina. Have a great cookout
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