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A lazy-daisy dewdrop spell, Reflective in a blade - Grass-green and sunny eyes do dwell. Beyond the dawn, a quick farewell. The subtleness - not much to wade. Sun burns and splash, does fade. The cochlea, a sunrise plume. A dove’s cooing in ear. Soft petals do dry off and bloom, Emerge and release sweet perfume. The magic born, at disappear of dewiness, I hear. Was manna made of morning dew? It's honey-sweet, a treat. The angel bakery, their crew - Heaven’s bread fell to earth debut. The blessings land - each day tastes great. What is it - it’s not wheat. To breathe, inhale, get handsy with… To touch and smell the morn’. A lovely mist that lands, no myth. Dayspring gatherers go forthwith. Spring’s endless generations born - Dew’s loveliness adorn.

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Date: 6/27/2022 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem capturing the essence of the dewdrop. Sure to be on the winner list., dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2022 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine!
Date: 6/25/2022 3:30:00 PM
Incredible poetry Kim, manna from heaven in a delightful read… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2022 5:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Belle! Hugs ~ K8m
Date: 6/23/2022 3:11:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Very descriptive and creative work that you have penned. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 6/23/2022 9:15:00 AM
Delightfully charming imaginative depiction, Kim. Best to you my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/23/2022 8:47:00 AM
"Was manna made of morning dew? It's honey-sweet, a treat. The angel bakery, their crew "- I too wonder if manna is sweetened dew drops ! Great imagination and a beautiful poem, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, my sweet friend! :)
Date: 6/23/2022 7:57:00 AM
What a lovely poem. So subtle and full of imagery. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much! Kisses and hugs ~ Kim

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