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A Larger Me

A larger me steers trouble away bringing it only near enough to see like the Ghost of Christmas Future answering prayers unprayed and I scream to ask who are you who are you who are you anyway silence answers my noisy mind until I close my eyes and see a bigger me embracing my small frame with hands as warm as kisses divine I feel him swimming in the fabric of everything and know I am one inside a whole inside a whole inside a larger whole forever he watches me wherever we dance in light ethereal flowing into my heart as sound as magic sunrises abound with a strong hand and warm heart he embraces me now somehow as we start to soar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2012 1:32:00 PM
Very well written Patrick....like the end alot.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/11/2012 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise! I'm glad you enjoyed it... I liked how it ended itself for me when I was writing... love when that happens that way... xoxo Patrick
Date: 1/11/2012 11:29:00 AM
Finding ones self inside ones self and embracing what dwells within...well that's what I see as I read this well thought out poem. Kind of need 3-d glasses for the mind with this one lol Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for trying to see what I'm saying Debra... appreciate that you took the trouble of digging out your 3-D glasses :-)

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