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A Lady Hamlet

A Lady Hamlet

I’ve been tied in with such a clever lady, It’s my fate

Has in-built, reverse-forward button ready, It’s my fate

When she is in good humor the forward button is on,

Make an adverse statement, reverse is ready, It’s my fate

A lady Hamlet who faces a dilemma never,

To be or not to be not question really, It’s my fate

But she is always forward in things conjugal ever.

Tend to get what I desire ultimately, It’s my fate

In case if Ram is cross with somebody & criticize,

She’ll make enemy’s enemy a buddy, It’s my fate.


DATE 25-10-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
7th place win
Contest: Take the leap by Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © Dr.Ram Mehta

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  1. Date: 11/15/2013 11:12:00 AM
    DR. Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Very interesting tale of a couple's love, Dr. Ram Mehta, congratulations on your win with this fine ghazal

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:19:00 AM
    enjoyed reading this one again...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 10:44:00 AM
    congrats on your win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Very Nice. Congrats on your win Dr. Ram.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Dr Ram--you are everywhere--love the "fate" connection--great idea!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:37:00 AM
    A lady Hamlet who tends to get what you desire is a blessing.A lady is a lady..and its a many a men's faith conquered to have one in his life.To be or not to be..To be is always the best answer when it comes to having our soulmate with both f/f and reverse : )..Lovely poem

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:39:00 PM
    sounds as though she keeps you on track...nicely penned ghazal...good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 5:59:00 PM
    the balance stick, am i the joke, stop you on the middle stroke, cut you short bloody quick, hold you close, give you the flick, tough love the voice does croak, between those thighs betwixt, sandlewood the smoke, here loving thoughts exist, i hope...:} Don re: Dr Ram "A Lady Hamlet"

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:49:00 PM
    What would we really be without a Lady Hamlet? Would we be or would we not be without her? Excellent piece!

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Beautiful piece of Ghazal. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
    DR. RAM; I love the way you put this together. it's lovely. thanks for sharing and for reading - A Vida Loca. that means a crazy life, which a lot of young kids live, even grown ups.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Just a note so I do not steer you wrong, in the ghazal contest I was only having the entrants focus on 2 aspects of a Traditional Ghazal, the KAAFIYAA [endrhyme in the word BEFORE the final phrase or word] and the RADEEF [the repeated phrase or word] to be truly Traditional would need consistent meter.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/26/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and that each couplet stands alone as a poem like a proverb or an epitaph/epigram
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 6:04:00 PM
    I understand this write quite well, she is the giver of pleasure and pain at the throw of a switch. Nicely expressed thank you for your write. I'm glad you enjoyed my harvest time poem also.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:08:00 PM
    I enjoyed this, Dr. Mehta. Very well written. Best wishes in the contest

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 12:22:00 PM
    Very pleasant reading your verse today. Thanks for entering my contest. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Cute one..I got a chuckle at the end..Just what I needed for the morn..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit by my work with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:22:00 AM
    Oh this is truly impressive,, just love it....

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:00:00 AM
    - Well done, Dr.Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)