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A Kiss of Sunshine

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A Kiss of Sunshine

upon the still lake
maple leaves float in sunshine
red, gold and orange
my heart swells with sad longings
of Thumbelina’s lily

flat, green and shaded
the pink of lily petals
bathed in only sun
to be that child once again
dreaming of the Fairy Prince

bold and golden bee
striped in royal black velvet
lifted on sun rays
I dream of holding a child
a Gran reading fairy tales


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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:50:00 AM
    I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Debbie. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 9:36:00 AM
    Sun-spilt fantasies and nostalgic memories regally intertwined. The human element in the poem complements the natural scenery.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:33:00 PM
    A nice win Lady..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Grand dreams my princess teach, may your desires be known and accomplished, sending you a big hug, congrats, xxx vie

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:07:00 PM
    to be a child again and always.. stunning, debbie.. congrats with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:59:00 PM
    I remember this charmer!!! Congrats, Debs.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Lovely Tankas! Love the fairy tale twist. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:16:00 AM
    CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A BEAUTIFUL WRITE AND WELL DESERVED WIN LUV .. ALWAYS TERRIFIC ..

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Big congratulations on you win Debbie xx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:51:00 AM
    A sweet, touching Tanka, that emotes such deep longing flavor....love this. And thanks for the Tanka advice....I have only recently realized after all this time, the nature of the pivot....I will work on that new information. Thanks for your input!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:28:00 AM
    congrats on your win ....

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:33:00 AM
    Congratulations Debbie for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:32:00 PM
    So soft and sweet and wrapped in the forceful divine feminity in its original purity. A poem that calms down in this hurry-up life of modern women. Thanks a lot, Debbie: I'll take time for my Fairy Prince today...but fairy tales for myself! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:12:00 PM
    so sweet, Debs, about the wish for a grandchild. I liked the blend of fairy tale with imagery.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:59:00 AM
    Sweet write with some excellent imagery Debbie. Loved the image of Granny reading out fairy tales. Oh! how the child and the gran love it! Good luck.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:06:00 PM
    ILTSM! Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments on my wins my dear friend! Wish you all the best always!! love, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:39:00 PM
    Lovely Debbie,I like the first one. :-)

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Autumn's best picture - reflected in a lake. Lovely Debbie - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

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