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A Kiss

I like silver rain when she dropped on thy Moist body, moist mind, I just hold thine hand, I’m shivering because I’m reading thine brown eye It’s like drinking a cup of coffee, but not on this land. When the clouds become darker as like the charcoal When the nature become the foe of us, and thou whisper I Love you; then I forget my past colors of purple, Thy smile, thy eyes, thy wet lips make me crisper. Thy beauty like fresh ornament in this world And I’m the thesaurus of her beauty all time, Sometime I feel like to be the nature of the wild And I hold her tightly in my arms and we chime, And I feel passionate when of thee wet lips is wavering, But I can’t hold myself to kiss thee, when thy lips are shivering. 23/01/2016 Tullamore, Ireland

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Date: 2/3/2016 11:45:00 PM
:) LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:14:00 PM
Moniruzzaman Shuvro,:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 2/1/2016 8:01:00 PM
thank you so much .. it is really big surprise to me.. I'm really exciting ..
Date: 1/31/2016 3:10:00 PM
Lovely write
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/31/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you soooo much ... thanks a lot...
Date: 1/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
Anytime
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 2/1/2016 6:04:00 AM
you most well come ..
Date: 1/25/2016 9:35:00 PM
Moniruzzaman Shuvro, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/26/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot.... thank you so much for visited my page... //Hugs //
Date: 1/25/2016 7:28:00 PM
Breathtaking romantic interlude so lovely. Well done Moniruzzaman.
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/26/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much ... thanks a lot...
Date: 1/25/2016 8:54:00 AM
- What beautiful sonnet, Moniruzzaman - a pleasure to read :) - Welcome to P-Soup ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/25/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you so much... thanks a lot ... Hugs// MONIR-:)
Date: 1/24/2016 8:19:00 PM
Moniruzzaman Shuvro, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/25/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so much .. it is really my pleasure to me that I write here... I'm also lucky to be a part of this site... and I got some of good friends like you ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 1/24/2016 3:19:00 PM
the imagery's amazing, Moniruzzman, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Moniruzzaman Shuvro
Date: 1/24/2016 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much ... your nice comment will inspire to me for something doing best... I'm Moniruzzaman, I'm living in Tullamore, Ireland, and I like to write poems, novel, horror story etc. ... I'm really Thankful to you... and it is really glad to me be your friend ... again Thank you sooo much ...

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