A Kiss

As you and I swim the same ocean I swim the vastness of it in search of you There are no boundaries to what we can do If I love you and you love me The hidden shores are awaiting us let us go then to paradise You bring me in like a love struck dove sitting on her perch You have put a light in my heart that I never thought was possible Your love unwinds me like a ball of yarn as we lay together as one soul The love I have inside is just for you alone as I feel the softness of your words Your warmth fills my aching soul I dream of your lips on mine I had a dream that we shared a kiss once It was a kiss that lasted forever

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Gu Jendayi

Date: 11/6/2022 7:22:00 AM

Love how you put this together

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2013 2:33:00 PM

beautiful thoughts and it reads like an extended valentine to the one you love.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/14/2013 9:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 12/20/2012 3:59:00 AM

So loving sweet, kiss brings the heat, a closer link to passion, entitled here, your love sincere, entitles you, your ration, heartfelt, the mind retreats, consumes one in its fashion, till estacy deletes... re: A Kiss Debbie Duncan Don Johnson

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/21/2012 12:40:00 AM

I thank you Don ;}

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/26/2012 9:30:00 PM

What a wonderful love story, you draw the reader into your bliss. I have very much enjoyed reading your poems. You are an excellent writer.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/20/2012 4:05:00 PM

I hope your dream kiss comes true....sweet and lovely write Debbie. Hugs!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/20/2012 6:57:00 PM

Thank you CeCilia for your sweet words hugs back at ya ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2012 3:04:00 PM

This is a sweet kiss poem Debbie....love it and hope it will last forever. - oxox love Anne-Lise <3

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/24/2012 10:21:00 PM

Hello Annie ,,,, thank you,,, I'd like that kiss to last forever too,,,, but there is only me ;} you have a blessed day ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 7/15/2012 4:52:00 PM

the one time chance the sweet romance, the thoughts of long ago, when love was spirited in its dance, but i had to let you go, but memory comes en-trance:( i know..... re Dubby Duncan "A Kiss" Don

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/15/2012 5:42:00 PM

Hello Don ;} A kiss from a prince of a guy " you "

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/15/2012 8:42:00 AM

A very sweet tender write... filled with warmth and love....hugs Michael

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/15/2012 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Michael for reading my words ;}

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/4/2012 1:11:00 PM

Beautiful 'love word'!!! Very nice... Terry

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/4/2012 8:58:00 PM

Thank you Terry for stopping by to read it ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 6/26/2012 8:54:00 PM

soul searching for the other half, the other half of coin, ladies romance, so sweetly cast, meets man of the fiery loins, en charmed be calmed, enjoyed... thank you Debby Duncan "A Kiss" Don

Don Johnson
Date: 6/27/2012 12:14:00 AM

nothing sweeter, soulful meter, and the passion of the past, completes her... at last...

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/26/2012 9:42:00 PM

Thank you Don,,,,, old love letters ;}

Jl Sadberry

Date: 5/21/2012 11:59:00 PM

*.* ... "THE MOST BEAUTIFUL KISS OF ALL, 'YOU!'" ... *.*

Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/22/2012 4:14:00 AM

Thank you ,,, have a blessed day .

Shirley Long

Date: 5/7/2012 11:00:00 AM

This is such a sweet romantic love poem, I enjoyed reading it today. Each verse about the kiss sends so much excitement and arousal to one's soul. Good write.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2012 8:41:00 AM

A beautiful poem of romance and passion Debbie.Enjoyed reading it.

David Williams

Date: 5/7/2012 6:27:00 AM

Debbie romantic and great imagery..David