A Kiss

When lips collide as they are want to do the tender crush distills all to a moment revealing what makes a man believe in heaven is contained in her eyes and released in her kiss

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/3/2012 7:53:00 AM

Descriptive write. Thanks for the comments.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/1/2012 1:19:00 PM

Marvelous description. :) Much liked this verse Always, Laura

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/27/2012 12:35:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings Chuck. Love, Carol

Shirley Long

Date: 2/26/2012 10:36:00 AM

Chuck this is a wonderful love poem about A Kiss! I enjoyed reading it and loved the verses what makes a man believe in heaven is contained in her eyes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2012 6:58:00 AM

Chuck a big congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice andsweet beautiful Sunday like your cute poem here......pd

Taylor Thompson

Date: 2/21/2012 1:14:00 PM

Oh so sweet :) Thanks for sharing

Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/21/2012 11:11:00 PM

Thank you Taylor. I've enjoyed some of your work also. Keep writing, too. - Chuck

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chuck. Love, Carol

Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/21/2012 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Carol. I am learning a lot from reading your work. It is helping to refine my word choices, and become more economical with them. - Chuck

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/19/2012 10:10:00 PM

Chuck, this is a beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week................S.Ronthorpe

Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/21/2012 11:09:00 PM

Your comment was the first notice I got about being featured. Thank you for the compliments. - Chuck

Cindy Lu

Date: 2/18/2012 8:19:00 AM

says much in short form. Nice writing. Sincerely, Cindy Lu

Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/18/2012 11:41:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your taking time to read and comment. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2012 12:45:00 AM

wowie!!! this is really nice, Chuck. I don't think I have seen you here before at soup. thanks for your comment on my most recent post. You need to start entering some of these contests. Like the dodoitsu one on trees. I can see that you are already skilled and this one you did here could easily be transformed into tanka. (those are always popular with contests here) Goodnight now. Andrea

Chuck Novotny
Date: 2/11/2012 12:56:00 AM

Thank you. I'm still learning poetry. Words are less a problem. The various forms I hope to be abe to explore in the coming days and weeks and life!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 8:11:00 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Chuck. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2012 1:54:00 AM

Wery sweet....kiss...in heaven..:) oxox love Anne-Lise