A Kiss

Crimson lips have fled your grasp I am your one teasing smile A kiss redder than roses Caught in your embrace

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations Sasha, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/6/2011 5:44:00 AM

Wow! Sasha you nailed my attention with this master piece...Beautiful and romantic...always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 10:16:00 AM

So romantic and great imagery too. Congratulations, sasha!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 5:28:00 PM

Very nice Sasha. congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 3:36:00 PM

Hi Sasha - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congrats Sasha on your well deserved win in this contest of Francine!--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 11:04:00 AM

Hello Sasha, Ohh I really love how this welcomes you. Beautiful, Congratulations on your win! As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 10:47:00 AM

Captivating, Sasha! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 10:18:00 AM

Ooo I'm caught, I'm caught. Beautiful poetry Sasha. Many congrats on your deserved win....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 8:17:00 AM

Congrats Sasha on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy...

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:33:00 AM

Sasha, Good to see you in the top 8. Agape, Moses

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:36:00 PM

congrats on your 8th place win in my contest Sasha, beautifully done

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/2/2011 3:37:00 PM

Very sensual pen picture you have worded so well, Sasha

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/2/2011 10:45:00 AM

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