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A Kid and His Umbrella

A lovely rainfall Big boots and an umbrella Meandering down the walk Looking for puddles Keeping dry from rain above Soaked to the skin from below

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2014 9:17:00 PM

This is cute, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2014 3:54:00 PM

Ahh!! Congrats on this winning work..Sara

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2014 10:28:00 PM

BARBARA, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/3/2014 4:20:00 PM

This poem brought back some good childhood memories for me. I really enjoyed this fun write, Barbara. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2014 2:49:00 PM

What a lovely poem, LNC. Children do seem to have fun in the rain, even if they get "soaked to the skin." Congrats on your win. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2014 5:03:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, barbara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 11:50:00 PM

Nice write. ...pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 11:25:00 AM

- Hey Barbara - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/2/2014 10:54:00 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Barbara ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/1/2014 3:40:00 PM

part of the joy in life is making the big splash.

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 4/1/2014 2:29:00 PM

Talofa dear Barbara, had to look up choka, so glad to be learning from the masters here in PS. Loved the imagery subtly played by your clever use of words. Great write.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/1/2014 2:48:00 PM

So glad you stopped by. Are you enjoying the Soup? Hope so. Look forward to reading more of your poems. BG

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 2:44:00 PM

Love this playful write,. Congrats on your wins, too, my friend