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A June Flower

At first it was only a seed. I said to myself, maybe this is something that I need. I took it home with me and with soil that I had - I planted there my seed. I nursed it with love and water that fell from heaven. Everyday I would check on it, until one day, I saw a sprout. I gave thanks to God, He was also doing His part. I gave it tender loving care, made sure it got water and sunshine too. It made me very happy as I was watching my flower grow. It was June when she came to life. One day she was all grown and I couldn't love her more. It was my daughter, that I would love forever more. She was born the 23 of June. Those are the memories that I can never forget... Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo This is for Joann Grisetti's contest June Memories

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
The day beore my mother's birthday, this is a wonderful gem of a poem...
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Date: 5/27/2012 6:18:00 PM
this is wonderful. Tell her happy birthday for me!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
she came into this world with loving care , and with you, your love and life she would share. she is in a beautiful garden created by you and the LORD has helped you see it through. she has to read your thoughts and feelings from this poem. god bless !
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/26/2012 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Louis for your kind words. Lucilla
Date: 5/22/2012 12:08:00 PM
joyful poem. May the lord forever sprinkle his glorious blessings upon you. Ronny
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/24/2012 2:49:00 PM
Hi Ronny; Thank you for your visit and rweading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla
Date: 5/20/2012 7:13:00 PM
Delightful, Lucilla! Is there a more joyous occasion than the birth of your child! God bless, Keith
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/21/2012 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Keith for your nice comment. Many blessings. Lucilla
Date: 5/20/2012 3:28:00 PM
Lucilla, woooow ...just beautiful written, love it from the first line to the last. - Wish you luck in contest !!!! You have to win, it is a win poem for me.Have a lovely new week. Take care. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/20/2012 6:15:00 PM
Anne; Thanks it is nice of you to think that. Have a good night. Lucilla
Date: 5/20/2012 1:52:00 AM
Lucilla, a wonderful poem and memory to hold... .. thank you for sharing and expressing your poem with us. Take care~ Linda
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/20/2012 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much. and God bless you. Lucilla

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