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A Journey of Rarity

How I long to see me on a walk of possibilities a journey of rarity a world of no worries wide opening the gates of boundaries the mind lines crossing the heart chambers stretching.. *** Set on the branch of my heart rest with your Love feel home and feed soul My senses I would close My mind I would set loose A sweet surrender the Self wings carefree.. *** How I long to dream of me detached as I could be One and only me! sweet and true be! No sound dares a quiet mind or mutes a heart’s glee..

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/20/2023 5:43:00 PM

A blessed journey that will be, Besma. For God said, "be still and know that I am God." Happy Thankgiving! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Robertina B.

Date: 4/27/2021 6:00:00 PM

Your talent indeed shines so beautifully, dear Besma. .. Absolutely enjoyed your splendid write! So uplifting and profound.. Aloneness can be so fulfilling and heartfelt! Many blessings to you, my friend.. This is going into my faves!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2021 5:32:00 AM

My delight is great as I read amazing feedbacks on my humble words! My pleasure is immense to read your wonderful feedback dear Robertina! Thank you so much for your beauty and generosity! Deeply humbled and honoured.. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2021 10:19:00 AM

You are so right Besma, it is the unattainable that encourages us to surge forward. You need to surrender such a kind, blessed, unique soul and heart to the winds and wings of heaven. Love, love, love your poetry, set your heart free, it is so gentle a heart and one that inspires me and I'm sure many on soup, be safe my dearest friend Besma, Hugs and love, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2021 4:23:00 AM

Dearest friend Jenny, how l am deeply humbled by your great words of appreciation and praise! How blessed to have so sweet a soul sister reading and wonderfully commenting on my poetry! I can't thank you enough for the amount of beauty and happiness you bring to my soul! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/18/2021 12:54:00 AM

:) sometimes a short comment is the best of all

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2021 4:19:00 AM

My pleasure sweet poetess ! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/15/2021 4:06:00 PM

Loneliness is actually a wonderful thing when we need to relax and to tell his sorrows and agony or just to feel the limitless of our very tiny word, your words go straight to the heart. With my best regards to you.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/16/2021 4:24:00 PM

Your profound feedback delighted my very soul.. and so glad I am to know that my humble words touched your poetic soul.. deeply humbled.. thank you once again for your support, Lasaad! My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/13/2021 2:23:00 PM

This is a lyrical wish for an utopia that I'm afraid is unattainable in this world. Perhaps in the next. But of that I am sure.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/16/2021 3:53:00 PM

What is unattainable is what really sustains us to appreciate and look up to life! Always a great pleasure to read your insightful and encouraging feedbacks.. thank you so much, Victor! My warmest wishes and best regards.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/13/2021 9:08:00 AM

on the branch of my heart rests Love, for great poets such as you, Have a blessed day, bloom where you are planted dear friend. xo

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/16/2021 3:43:00 PM

I sincerely appreciate your kind response regarding my humble poetry! How generous of you, dear Rose to brighten my soul with your warm and beautiful sentiments.. thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/13/2021 6:43:00 AM

This is so beautiful Besma--your poem has the beat of a song and it is wishful like dreams. Much enjoyed the longing for sweet surrender and heart in glee. I am saving this amazing write in my FAVES.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/16/2021 3:38:00 PM

I'm so happy you have enjoyed my humble thoughts and feelings, and I'm so pleased to know that it's worthy of being cherished as a fave.. Deeply humbled and grateful for your great support dear Vijay.. My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.